--bina jurm-o-khata khud ko koi aesi saza dena--

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh November 1, 2007, 2:55pm 1

Bina jurm-o-khata khud ko koi aesi saza dena
bohat mushkil hey meri jaaN tumhaiN yaksar bhula dena

merey Mola agar tu ne dubara zindagi bakhshii
tou bas itni guzaarish hey , mujhe patthar bana dena!

maiN zehni taur pe khud ko zara tayyar kar looNgi
bichar janay sey kuch pehlay mujhey humdam…bata dena

tumhari yeh shararat aaj tak hai naqsh dharkan pe
dabay paooN chalay aana…mera jhumka hila dena

phir iske ba’ad jiske pas bhi jao…ijazat hey
mujhe ik baar apne naam ki mehndi laga dena

faqat itni guzarish thi…mujhe kuch roshni day do !
tumhaiN kisne kaha tha yeh…meri basti jala daina

jisay barish ke paani maiN baha kar muskuratay they
mujhe kaaghaz ki wuh kashti zara phir say bana dena

umar bhar phir tumhara rasta taknay say acha hey
ke tum janay say kuch pehlay meri aankhaiN bujha dena

tumhaiN is baar chitthi meiN faqat yeh baat likhni hey
ke saawan laut aaya hey…mujhey jhoola jhula dena..!!

By Mehroo

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bheegiyaad November 1, 2007, 2:58pm 2

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awesome :k:

tum_bin_1 November 1, 2007, 3:47pm 3

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Great :k:

Precious_Khan November 1, 2007, 4:21pm 4

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ZabardasT ..... :~)

Shab-e-Hijar November 1, 2007, 4:26pm 5

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bohatttt khooob :k:

Ali_2 November 1, 2007, 4:34pm 6

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beautiful :k:

_Masoom_Muskaan November 1, 2007, 8:50pm 7

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NikamiJano November 1, 2007, 9:34pm 8

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umar bhar phir tumhara rasta taknay say acha hey
ke tum janay say kuch pehlay meri aankhaiN bujha dena
beautiful...ye mehro kon haiN

Shab-e-Hijar November 1, 2007, 11:10pm 9

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tum kyu sharma rahi ho

ghazal_kisi_ke November 2, 2007, 2:36am 10

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finally, i read a beautiful piece of work. superb thanks for sharing :k:

Dushwari November 2, 2007, 3:21am 11

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thanks for sharing, Gule-Tasbeeh.
best,
Dushwari

A Muslim, a Christian, a Sikh and a Hindu Walk into a College Dorm Room& Discover....

_Masoom_Muskaan November 2, 2007, 7:24am 12

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wo ap kee mar ka aser pehle ho gea tah monh pe

redidentity November 2, 2007, 7:33am 13

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Wow..

SJ November 2, 2007, 11:33am 14

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nice sharing

GuL-e-Tasbeeh November 2, 2007, 4:51pm 15

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Thanks guys for liking :~)