Hajoom shahar say hut kar, hadoodey shahar kay baad
woh muskara kay milay bhi toh kaun dekhta hai.
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nice one...
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hum bewafa hargiz na they
jab aap miley aap bachon walay they :D
PS: v nice ehsan g :)
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v nice :)
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hmmm.. whose sher is this???
it's a good couplet but the tone is very very attention seeking... poet wants his/her mehboob to meet him/her with a smile in public to either make people jealous or poet has avery showing off personality :-D
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aur phir shaair ko eitraaz bhee hai kaY shehr kee hudood saY baahir mil rahai haiN.... :P
achaa mazaaq bar taraf, whose sher is this, if you know? :)
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^ I don't know.
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achaa mazaaq bar taraf, whose sher is this, if you know? :)
sher uno ne pakra ho sakta hia un ka he ho.....:)
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it's a good couplet but the tone is very very attention seeking... poet wants his/her mehboob to meet him/her with a smile in public to either make people jealous or poet has avery showing off personality :-D
AQ wo SheR hain na is leay public main bata kar rahya ap b koi bakRi wala sheyer dhoondh lain na :D
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^
then in which case, it is in wrong forum :P
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PS: v nice ehsan g :)
Bachay toh rahay eik taraf
hum toh aab poteeon walay hain. :p
is that a shair?
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is that a shair?
iss khiyaaL ko iss tarah pesh kiyaa jaataa tau ziadah lutf rehtaa
Yeh saheeh hai kaY hum bachoN waalaY haiN
magar uss saY baRh kar hum poteeoN waalaY haiN
if needed, I can turn it into a ghazal :p
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Yeh saheeh hai kaY hum bachoN waalaY haiN magar uss saY baRh kar hum poteeoN waalaY haiN
if needed, I can turn it into a ghazal :p
Muaraar, Muqaraar.
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Yeh saheeh hai kaY hum bachoN waalaY haiN
magar uss saY baRh kar hum poteeoN waalaY haiN
Hum tum ko millaY haiN waqt guzarnaY kaY ba’ad
yahaaN abb aur loug nazraiN bichaanaY waalaY haiN
Kahaa kal kuch yooN meraY betaY naY kaY Abba Jaan!
Sher aap kaY kiyaa maazi kee mohabbat kaY NaalaY haiN? 
paRh kar apnaa hee kalaam maiN khud royaa Anwaar
qismat par kiouN meraY iss qadar taalaY haiN:D
-AQ 
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Fil badeeh honaY kee wajah saY misroN kee tawaalat aur ikhtesaar ko baraah-e-mehrbaani nazar andaaz farmaa dijiye gaa ... kaheeN kaheeN lehn maiN jo kami aaye hai, tifl-e-maktab samajh kar dar guzar famaa dijiye gaa...
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Wah Wah
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Nawaazish :D
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kya baat hai AQ weldone 
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AQ :
PS 
me tu ap ko kanwara samj k kuch baat kar laiti thei AQ…