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yeh ehsan bhai kaY perspective saY likhaa gaya hai 
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Baat chal nikli hai aab dekhain kahan tuk paunchay.
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oh tu me khulam khula baat kar sakti ap se ye mutlab hia ap ka 
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“baat nikli hai tau abb duur talak jaaye gee”
NJ: you are quite welcome to contact me in the event when you have any question regarding poetry.. satisfactory answer is not guaranteed though…
oh only poetry…dekha is leay tu Nikami k mufat main khush fahmiaa’N paal laiti 
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^opps qoute ki bajaiey edit ka button daba dya AQ..lakin edit kuch nahi kia such se :D
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last line is not mine…
I will keep it as it is…
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usi line ko tu quote banana tha na wo nikami ki hia aur as is
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I wonder if its another one of ur CONCEPT that you gonna give out
AQ: 
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dekh toh dil kay jaan say uthta hai
yeh dooaan sa kahan say uth tha hai. 
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Meer naY yeh sher karachi kee busses kaY liye kahaa thaa
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Aap kia ‘barr’ ki talash main GS pe aati hein?
AQ pe doray dalne ki nakaam koshish na ki jae please 
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koen kia un per frishtey nazar lagiey bethay:)
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qasam saY… you asked me this to say it to ehsan bhai.. meri buraaiyoN kaY thelaY maiN aik aur jurm-e-deegar ast kaa izaafaa 
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AQ: 
don’t worryy he wont say anything to ya
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Nice :k:
Ehsan ji, if you don’t mind, I would like to share a sher (chori shuda) here, rather than opening a thread.
woh mili tou sadiyon k baad bhi merey lab pey koi gila na tha
ussey meri chup ney rula diya, jissey guftagoo mein kamal tha
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^*** ARAAAAAAAAAAYYYY WAHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!*** :k:
p.s stop actin as if u r dukhi
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Yaqeen na aaey tou aik baar pooch kar dekho
jo hans raha hai woh zakhmon sey choor nikley gaa
OR
Yeh khush-nazri khush nazar aaney k liye hai
yeh tou andar ki udaasi ko chupaaney k liye hai
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there was one sher I read somewhere .. forgot the first verse but know the second one .. kinda similiar to these .. 'jinn kay labouN par ho hansii .. unn ki aankheiN aksar udaas houti hain"
wishcould find the whole thing:smack:
:k:
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Sometimes people are extra happy to hide their sorrow feelings.