Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

Niksik · February 23, 2009, 10:19pm

Aaye hain samajhaane log
hain kitane diivaane log

Dairoharam mein chain jo milataa
kyon jaate maiKhaane log

Jaan ke sab kuchh, kuchh bhii na jaane
hain kitane anjaane log

Vaqt pe kam nahiin aate hain
ye jaane pahachaane log

Ab jab mujhko hosh nahiin hai
aaye hain samajhaane log

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 11:21pm

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

Aaye hain samjhane log kya kehna very nice intikhab niksik thumbs up :k: n thx for fulfilling ur promise

Niksik · February 23, 2009, 11:23pm

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

Thank you jee.

This was written by the famous Sikh urdu poet Kunwar Mahendra Singh Bedi Sahar.

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 11:24pm

Thanks 4 da poet's name Niksik ! I hope u vl stick around tym by tym !

Niksik · February 23, 2009, 11:27pm

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

I will! Thanks for the warm welcome.

being_lonely · February 23, 2009, 11:28pm

My pleasure niksik ...

Koyal · February 25, 2009, 10:42pm

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

nice 1 nik sik and welcome on our poetry form :)

Niksik · February 25, 2009, 11:25pm

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

Thank you I wish I had written it though!

aabla_pa · February 26, 2009, 4:32am

i Welcomes u

Nice poem. :k:

Shab-e-Hijar · February 26, 2009, 6:27pm

Nice… thanks for sharing nikki

Lusi · February 27, 2009, 5:37am

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

Nice one nikki, hope to see you around more :)

Niksik · February 27, 2009, 5:38am

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

I will I will.

be right back.

Niksik · February 27, 2009, 5:43am

Re: Being Lonely: my promise fulfilled!

Hansi khanakti hui
aur buhji buhji khusihyaan
hai dosti ki mahak se
hai rachi hui ghaRiaan

Maza anokha sa hai
aate jaate lamhon mein
kitabein godh mein phaili
hai khoye baaton mein

Rafakaton main khazana
jo hamne paya hai
na dil pe bojh hai koi
na gum ka saaya hai

Hasan Akbar Kamal