barish ki ik nazam...

chodhry · July 16, 2003, 5:37pm

barish ki ik nazam…

Rut ki pehli shararat mein
khuley aasman taley
badiloon ki chatri aurhey
thandi hawa ki athkelion mien
neher kinaarey lambi serrk pey
matti ki khushbu key sang
barish key jhoomtey naachtey qatrey saath liey
door tak chalna
kitna acha lagga
teri sangat mein

chodhry

Tum Bohat Yaad Aatey Ho

Parathna (Iltija)

Teri Yaad mein, Bin Piye, Mast hovey…

Aagahi!

Tumhein yaad ki banhoon mein liye…

thanks for your time and comments

Dilsay · July 16, 2003, 5:46pm

Very nice....

Capricorn · July 16, 2003, 5:49pm

Nice:k:

Muslim_Queen · July 16, 2003, 6:01pm

very nice

khamosh_raat · July 16, 2003, 6:36pm

kool...nash

system · July 16, 2003, 9:50pm

Nice…

Zakhmi_Umar · July 17, 2003, 3:58am

Re: barish ki ik nazam…

buhat khoob :k: ye bhi aachi hai

Black_Mamba · July 17, 2003, 7:11am

:k: very nice

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · July 17, 2003, 12:54pm

Re: barish ki ik nazam...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by chodhry: *
barish ki ik nazam...

Rut ki pehli shararat mein
khuley aasman taley
badiloon ki chatri aurhey
thandi hawa ki athkelion mien
neher kinaarey lambi serrk pey
matti ki khushbu key sang
barish key ghoomtey naachtey qatrey saath liey
door tak chalna
kitna acha lagga
teri sangat mein

chodhry

[/QUOTE]

''Naher kinaray lambi saRak pe, matti ki khushbu kay sang''
Well i like tanhaa chalna :-D anyway its beautiful nazm, thanks for sharing :-)

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 17, 2003, 1:13pm

bohat achay :)

Amal · July 17, 2003, 1:41pm

Lovely stuff chodhry:k:…be’had khoobsoorat nazm hey…thanx for sharing with us:)

system · July 17, 2003, 5:04pm

Wow, zabardast :k::k:

jasmeen · July 17, 2003, 6:12pm

zaberdast aj kal karachi ka mosum kuch asa hi hay:)
mosum pah khoob jachtee hay ayh nazum:flower1:

chodhry · July 18, 2003, 1:09pm

Re: Re: barish ki ik nazam...

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *

''Naher kinaray lambi saRak pe, matti ki khushbu kay sang''
Well i like tanhaa chalna :-D anyway its beautiful nazm, thanks for sharing :-)
[/QUOTE]

inna romantic mousam ho phir bhi tanhayee ki khahish, quite strange....innni zada khud pasand ho aap????
anyways thank you so much for ur comments.

chodhry · July 18, 2003, 1:11pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by khamosh raat: *
kool...nash
[/QUOTE]

oyiiie, i cdnt understand this "nash"
punjaabi mein tu boihat burra word hey, i hope punjaabi mein nahien khaaa...heheheh

anyways thanks for visting

chodhry · July 18, 2003, 1:14pm

Amal aaap ney inni tarief ker dee hey, key aik dam saatveein asmaan pey cherrh gya hoon…hehehhe. chootey choootey loug lag rhey hein aaas paas…hehehe just kiding. keep encouraging me like this and one day i hope i will be able to come up with something much better.

thank you so much.

chodhry · July 18, 2003, 1:17pm

janaab esssi mousam ki hi tu mehrbaani hey yeh nazam, and yes i am missing another thing. no problem, i always miss her. us ka aur mousam ka, dounu ka qasoor hey es mein , meri koi galti nahien…hehehe

n thanks for ur flowers.

cuteepie · July 22, 2003, 2:09am

buhet khoob :k:

u r way to express anything is very nice :k:

keep it up

all the best

chodhry · July 22, 2003, 4:58am

thank you cuteepie…

amirbilal · July 22, 2003, 6:04am

very nice