barish ki ik nazam...

chodhry · July 22, 2003, 7:12am

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very nice
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thankyou amirbilal..:)

Koyal · July 22, 2003, 7:51pm

nice one choudhry saheeb..:)

chodhry · July 23, 2003, 4:52am

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nice one choudhry saheeb..:)
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thank you koyal

chodhry · July 24, 2003, 6:40am

ik dam inni teiz barish shuru hoi hey... aik sher aik dam sey zehn mein aa gya soocha aap logun sey share keroon.

Barish hoi tu gher key dareechey sey lag key
chup chaap sogwaar, tumhein soochtey rhey

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Zakhmi_Umar · July 24, 2003, 8:25am

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*Originally posted by chodhry: *
ik dam inni teiz barish shuru hoi hey... aik sher aik dam sey zehn mein aa gya soocha aap logun sey share keroon.

Barish hoi tu gher key dareechey sey lag key
chup chaap sogwaar, tumhein soochtey rhey

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wah jee wah , o hi mere wala hisaab :(

chodhry · July 24, 2003, 12:19pm

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*Originally posted by Zakhmi Umar: *

wah jee wah , o hi mere wala hisaab :(
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deikhna umer bhai, sab ka yahi hisaab ho gaa edher...:)

Zakhmi_Umar · July 24, 2003, 12:52pm

:k:

Swera · July 24, 2003, 3:37pm

gOOD1......

chodhry · July 24, 2003, 3:48pm

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*Originally posted by Swera: *
gOOD1......
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thankyou Swera

chodhry · August 18, 2004, 2:45pm

aisey hi barish sey yeh nazam yaad aa gye apni. :)

BoReD_iN_BrIsBaNe · August 18, 2004, 3:09pm

wah ni wah

neeli · August 19, 2004, 6:19pm

Hi,

nice nazam Choudry (wonder if u r azkar chaudry or some other choudry :) )

anywayz...reminds me of a short ghazal of parveen shaakir:

Baarish ka aik qatra
Meri palkon say uljha
Aur aankhon may doob gaya

Rgrds,

Naila.

PS: It feels nice to be back to the site after .. a long time. Good to see that Pak.org is still doing gr8.
Kudos to the ppl still around. Sum familiar name includes.. muzna, chaudry, dilse. Good to see they r still here. :)

zeen01 · August 20, 2004, 12:23am

chowdhry bhai ..tareef ke liye alfaz nahin hain mere pas. :k:

Minerva · August 22, 2004, 6:27am

beautifully written Chaudry :-)

chodhry · August 27, 2004, 7:46am

Thank you BIB, Zeen and Minerva

neeli neeli Thank you for liking the poem. mein azkaar chodhry hota tu edher nazmein post kerney ka time na hota erey paas anyways welcome back.

system · December 30, 2004, 9:36pm

Re: barish ki ik nazam…

Mujhey bhi bahut acha laga

Okay to be serious… It’s just wonderful… can’t find any words anymore to express how much i liked this one… issi liye… Mujhey bhi bahut acha laga

Dynamic_fire · December 31, 2004, 10:35pm

very nice

Rukhsarbibi · January 27, 2005, 8:04pm

Re: barish ki ik nazam...

sweet and romantic :)

Amal · January 28, 2005, 1:14pm

Re: barish ki ik nazam…

Frankly aek baat kahooN, pehli baar parrh kar to yaqeen nahi aaya ke ye aap ki apni poem hey. But credit goes to me that I know that you have got it in you which separates boys from men Chodhry bhai bohat hi zabardast nazm hey. Intehaai saada lekin dil ko choo leney waali. 10/10 from me

chodhry · January 31, 2005, 8:16pm

Re: barish ki ik nazam...

Thanks DF and RB.

KN, kab ki baat hey yeh :p

Shuker hey ab tu yaqeen aa gya hay na ..heheh Thanks Amal for such a nice comments and coming out of you. sachi I am flattered :D