**Tere baghair bhi to ghanimat hai zindagi
khud ko gaNva ke koan teri justaju karay
kaaf/ye**
**Tere baghair bhi to ghanimat hai zindagi
khud ko gaNva ke koan teri justaju karay
kaaf/ye**
Re: Bait Bazi
**kab tak dil kii Khair manaaye.n, kab tak raah dikhaaoge
kab tak chain kii mohalat doge, kab tak yaad na aaoge
alif/yeh
**
Re: Bait Bazi
ik dard kabhi, ik aah kabhi, ik sooz kabhi, ik thais kabhi
is khana-e-dil mein rozana mehman badaltey rehtey hein !!
Re: Bait Bazi
ik dard kabhi, ik aah kabhi, ik sooz kabhi, ik thais kabhi
is khana-e-dil mein rozana mehman badaltey rehtey hein !!
**waah, bahot Khoob...
na gaNwaao naavak-e-neem_kash, dil-e-reza_reza gaNwaa diyaa
jo bache haiN sang sameT lo, tan-e-daaGh_daaGh luTaa diyaa
jo ruke to koh-e-garaaN the ham, jo chale to jaaN se guzar gaye
rah-e-yaar ham ne qadam_qadam tujhe yaad_gaar banaa diyaa!**
:(
Re: Bait Bazi
Afsurdagi hai magar wajah-e-gham nahi maloom
Keh Dil pe bojh sa hai ranj-e-besabab ki tarah.
Re: Bait Bazi
Tamam umr us k khayal main guzri
mera khayal jise umr bhar na aya
Re: Bait Bazi
unke Khayaal aaye to aate chale gaye
deevah zindagii ko banaate chale gaye
Re: Bait Bazi
Ye soch lia hai k ab Us ko awaaz nahin deni Wasi
Ab k main bhi dekhon Wo mera talbgaar hay kitna
Re: Bait Bazi
kabhi aansu kabhi khushbu kabhi naghma ban kar
ham se har shaam mili hai tera chahra ban kar
Re: Bait Bazi
Kabhi fursatein jo naseeb hon..chaly ana merey paas tum
Hein adho0rey kitny hi muamley..teri zaat sy meri zaat tak.
Re: Bait Bazi
kabhi hum mile to bhi to kya mile wohi doriyaan wohi faasle
na kabhi hamare qadam barhe na kabhi tumhari jhijhak gai
Re: Bait Bazi
Yeh keh kar mere Dushman mujhe Haste hue chod gaye k,
"TERE APNE HI KAAFI HE TUJHE RULAANE K LIYE"
Re: Bait Bazi
lamhon ki pehchaan yehi hai udte jate hain
ankhon ki dehleez pe kaise theher gaya wo pal
Re: Bait Bazi
Pathar mujhe kehta hai mera chahne wala
Mein moum hoon, usne mujhe chuu kar nahi dekha
Re: Bait Bazi
Duniya ke iss shor ne Amjad, kiya kiya hum se chheen liya
Khud se baat kiye bhi ab to, kai zamane ho jate hain
Aur
Duniya ne teri yaad se begana kar diya
Tujhse bhi dilfareb hain gham rozgaar ke
Re: Bait Bazi
kia bait-baazii ke qawaaneen badal gaye?
Re: Bait Bazi
kia bait-baazii ke qawaaneen badal gaye?
Nahin mujhe Daal se shru hone wale ek hi mozu ke do shair zehn main aagae, iss waja se ek ki bajae do shair likh diye. ab aap apni marzi ka aakhri harf chun ke silsila aage badhaen.
Re: Bait Bazi
ye to sach hai chup rehne se pagal pan barh jata hai
pathar ke is shehr mai lekin akhir kis se baat karen
Re: Bait Bazi
Nahin mujhe Daal se shru hone wale ek hi mozu ke do shair zehn main aagae, iss waja se ek ki bajae do shair likh diye. ab aap apni marzi ka aakhri harf chun ke silsila aage badhaen.
oh...maiN confused thaa Harf-e-DAAL se she'r ko dekh kar kiuN k bait-baazii to aaKhirii Harf ke aaKhir she'r se hotii hai...lagtaa hai yahaN choice hai :) good :)
Re: Bait Bazi
ye to sach hai chup rehne se pagal pan barh jata hai
pathar ke is shehr mai lekin akhir kis se baat karen
**na jagah ghirii, na hawaa hillii, naqadam paRe vo magar khaRe
yehii jism kii haiN lataafateN to ham aise haath lagaa chuke!!! :(
***a she'r by my DAD!*