Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

Amal · May 8, 2011, 7:52pm

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Beautiful Faseeh bhai :k:

Amal · May 8, 2011, 7:54pm

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*AaNchal yuN girey sar sey ke saarey hat gaey pardey
nai tehzeeb ke ye lach'chan mujhey achey nahi lagtey
meiN sab tanqeed nigaaroN ko bohat azeez rakhta hooN
haaN kuch dost-numa dushman mujhey achey nahi lagtey
*
Ye

Innocent_Smile · May 9, 2011, 4:44pm

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ye kesa rat-jaga hai phir, pochao to in dil jalon se kabhi
jaagti aankhon ke sapnay bhi sach hoye hain kabhi?

Ye

jiia · May 10, 2011, 6:20pm

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hunnnnn pehla sha.ar:hmmm:,mi kuch nahi bol sakte q k mi sar par nahi lete
par DUPPATA lete zarur hun, JEANS k sath dupatta:omg:
so what agar mi DESI lagte hun,orr mare friends muj par hanste hen:@:
dusa sha,ar bohat acha hi:lajawab:

Amal · May 11, 2011, 1:18pm

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Thanx for the reaction…It’s been a long time that I see that someone is actually feeling the poetry, rather than only reading it. Thanx a lot jiia

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · May 12, 2011, 8:00am

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bohat achay.. :k:

Amal · May 12, 2011, 8:11pm

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Kya baat hey Gul...aap ney to aek hi post meiN sab ka hisaab chukta kar dia :~)

fara · May 24, 2011, 3:42pm

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**
yaadain meri zaat say lipti rehteen haiN
Mah-o-saal ki gardish may bhee zinda haiN

**

Azad · May 27, 2011, 10:25pm

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hummm

jiia · June 16, 2011, 5:01pm

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LAGTA HI k mushaera HI KERNA PARE GA shaar lane k leay:cheer:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 16, 2011, 9:13pm

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^
meri to soch ko Zang lag gaya hai khurchnay ka saamaan muhaya kiya jaaye..

jiia · June 27, 2011, 7:20pm

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mere to AMAD ka na pucho par likhne ki ijazat nahi:@:

ab ha watq to GS PE nahi hote k DIRECT LIKH SAKON KIA KARON:cryb:

deadsoul · June 28, 2011, 2:19pm

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na daniyon ka daur bhi akhir guzar gaya
koi deewana kehta tha, mohabbat theher jati hai

sfaseehrabbani · July 14, 2011, 4:21am

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یہی بہت ہے کہ وہ تیری نظر میں رہتا ہے
نہیں ملاتا وہ تجھ سے نظر تو کیا غم ہے

yehi bohat hay k woh teri nazar meiN rehta hay
naheeN milata woh tujh se nazar to keya gham hay

ye

Azad · July 17, 2011, 7:00pm

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acha hai

sarakhan28 · July 22, 2011, 6:55am

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Dard ki shiddat se sharminda nahi meri wafa
**Dost gehrey thai to unkey zakhm bhi gehrey lagey**

Amal · July 22, 2011, 2:45pm

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Sara welcome to GS :)

Shora-e-Gupshup meiN aap sirf apna kalaam hi share kar sakti heiN. Kisi aur ka likha kalaam Intikhaab forum meiN post kijeeye. Thanx :)

Amal · July 25, 2011, 2:16pm

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*ye khabar ab mili wo chala hi na tha
raasta bas saja ka sajaa reh gaya
hey mulaqaat ke baad bhi tishnagi
kuch kaha aur kuch an-kaha reh gaya
*
Alif

jiia · July 26, 2011, 10:45am

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bohat dil chu lene waley ASHA,AR hen

Amal · July 26, 2011, 2:13pm

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Shukriya jiia