Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal February 22, 2011, 7:43pm 1

Azizaan-e-man

Bait Baazi — Personal Edition is back. It’s a modified version of Bait Baazi for Sho’ra-e-Gupshup with a simple difference of poster being the author! Unlike the Intikhaab’s Bait Baazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly match the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That’s all guys

Amal February 22, 2011, 7:49pm 2

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Aek be-naam sa raabta reh gaya
** zindagi sey yehi waasta reh gaya**
bhar gaieN jholiyaaN deikhtey deikhtey
** aek meiN hi duwa maaNgta reh gaya**

"Alif"

chacha_Ghalib February 22, 2011, 8:39pm 3

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umeed kam hai kabhi kariN, manzil pay ja warood
'ghalib' jo niklay aap say rahnuma kay saath

"he"

I use my own name as my takhallus but am using ghalib here for the sake of anonymity.

fara February 22, 2011, 9:34pm 4

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HadsooN say muzzaayyan rahi zindagi
Aarzoo kay takhyul maiN jeetay rahay!

Shazia_Arif February 23, 2011, 4:32pm 5

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wow amazing,superb apa:)

Amal February 23, 2011, 6:34pm 6

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Great fara ji :k:

YaadoN ki kisi bhi gatthri meiN merey khaab chupa kar mat rakhna
tum apni piyaari aaNkhoN ko saari raat jaga kar mat rakhna
meiN hooN aik musafir aawaara sa jaaney kis dar par ruk jaooN
tum merey lieye in raahoN meiN koi deep jalaa kar mat rakhna

“Alif”

Shazia_Arif February 24, 2011, 7:22am 7

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acha

Shazia_Arif February 24, 2011, 7:24am 8

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an-kahi bat main b wo bat zarur thi
jisay tum samajh na sakay or hum khak ho gay...

_Masoom_Muskaan February 24, 2011, 7:26am 9

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u to aise hunsing jese u ko hi kaha

fara February 24, 2011, 3:28pm 10

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Apnay ansoo'N ki lariyaan pirotay rahay
Hum tu apnay he zakhmooN ko seetay rahay

GuL-e-Tasbeeh February 24, 2011, 3:53pm 11

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**^

Yaad k jugnuoN ne gheira is tarha
k ashkoN se daaman bhigotay rahay

**
**kuch aur sochtay haiN **

Shazia_Arif February 24, 2011, 4:12pm 12

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ye tha last word

Amal February 24, 2011, 5:20pm 13

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**
Ye roshni ke silsiley kuch door tak to aaeiN ge
tum soch lo phir raastey tareek-tar ho jaeiN ge
ye dil-lagi ab chorr do tum waapsi ki fikr karo
sun bekhabar sey humsafar ye morr phir na aaeiN ge

**"Ye"

fara February 25, 2011, 1:48pm 14

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**Yeh chandni raataiN, yeh sitarooN kay nazaray...
Kuch kehtay haiN hum say, zara sun ghoar say piaray..

RaatooN ki siyahi meri qismat maiN satar hay
Uss chaand ki sochooN main, kayeeN saal guzaray

Uss lehjay maiN silwat tu baRi dair maiN ayee
Hum jantay thay azal say woh thay na hamaray**

Amal February 25, 2011, 2:08pm 15

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Amazing fara ji

fara February 25, 2011, 2:10pm 16

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Shukran :)

Amal February 26, 2011, 7:07pm 17

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YaadoN ka aek shor tha rastoN meiN har taraf
hum ik lamhey ko dasht meiN tanha nahi huwey

"Ye"

fara February 27, 2011, 2:13am 18

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YadooN ki sawaari thee, rusta wuhi purana
** Loati ju khayalooN say, khud say bhee thee bay'gana**

Amal February 27, 2011, 2:46pm 19

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Ik ehsaas-e-be-yaqeeni raha subh bhi aur shab bhi
is shehr-e-pur-fareib meiN hum aaeiN heiN jab bhi

"Ye"

fara February 28, 2011, 4:32am 20

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Ya Khudda unko ko bhool jana tha, apnay dil ko phir aazmana thaa
** Woh mujhay bhool ker nahi bhoolay, jinki nazroon main ek fasana thaa**