Bait Bazi — Personal Edition

deadsoul · March 1, 2011, 8:18am

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aik kay baad aik ghaaoo tayyar rakhta hai
mera masiha khud mujhay beemar rakhta hai

"yey"

Amal · March 1, 2011, 4:31pm

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Lovely :k:

fara · March 3, 2011, 1:48am

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Awesome...

Amal · March 7, 2011, 1:32am

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YuN nahi ghar kabhi phir sajaya nahiN
** bas chiragh-e-mohabbat jalaaya nahiN**
** soch-dar-soch hum bas ulajhtey rahey**
** gunjaloN ka sira haath aaya nahiN**

"Noon"

Shazia_Arif · March 7, 2011, 4:52am

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naaz uthaye thay jiskay wo nazaron se gira gaya
nazrain phir dhoondti hain wohi girne ka muqaam...

Sannan · March 8, 2011, 7:18am

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waleedhbk · March 8, 2011, 7:19am

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Amazing

Shazia_Arif · March 8, 2011, 8:50am

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Shazia_Arif · March 8, 2011, 8:51am

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thanx

Amal · March 9, 2011, 4:06am

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One of your poorest Sorry to say so. But I know you have been writing much, much better.

Shazia_Arif · March 9, 2011, 8:52am

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okay but don’t you think your comment is lil harsh???

Sannan · March 9, 2011, 9:04am

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youn likhna chahiye tha kah "aap key comment kuch ziyada jallay sarray naheen hain "

_Masoom_Muskaan · March 9, 2011, 9:16am

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bhai u ne meri shazia baji ke sher ko poor kaha kia wo bhooka sher tha ghareeb tha

_Masoom_Muskaan · March 9, 2011, 9:16am

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bhai jhot nai bolte na lekin dil ke bohat ache hain

Amal · March 9, 2011, 11:31am

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I apologize

Shazia_Arif · March 9, 2011, 12:20pm

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i just love this "apologizing" way.

Amal · March 12, 2011, 2:20am

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Mohabbat keh'kashaN to hey magar aksar ye deikha hey
** zaraa si dhoop nikalney par nazaarey toot jaatey heiN**
** suno har rut meiN saahil par ttheharna theek nahi hota**
** kabhi toofaaN ke aaney par kinaarey toot jaatey heiN

**"Noon"

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · March 15, 2011, 3:52am

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Aik fil badi arz hay, shayad kay pasand aajai...
kafi arsay baad koi likhnay ki khuwish howi thi...
arz kia hay:

** Nigah-e-saqi say pi sharaab aur ganwaay hosh-o-hawaas**
** Ab dhoond'tay hain saqi ko bhari shaam guzarnay k baad**

UZ · March 15, 2011, 4:07am

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Nice one "?"

Anonymous_aeee7bc69f288ffbdb12f0990df3ff92 · March 15, 2011, 4:18am

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^ –
**** itni mukhtasir tareef kafi nahi zafeera ki ammi jaan
** Kuch to aur likhiay k parhtay parhtay hojai shaam**