Bait Bazi Part - LXX

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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*Originally posted by DeSiMuNdA: *
Rules of Bait Bazi:

**1. Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
2. One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
3. Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
4. If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
5. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
6. We should follow urdu alphabets.
7. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
8. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
will be allowed.
9. Avoid posting film songs. **

Shurkiya

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last shair from the previous thread:

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by ~Nazish~: *

*Ye hamiN the jin ke Libaas per sar-e-rah seyahi likhi gai
Yehi dagh the jo saja ke hum sare bazam-e-yaar chale gaye
Teri kajj adaai se haar ke shab-e-intazaar chali gai
Mere zabt-e-haal se ruuthh kar mere ghamgusaar chale gaey
[/QUOTE]

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Can i reply to my sher since it's a new thread? :D

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yoo'n na mil mujh say khafa ho jaisay
saath chal baad-e-saba ho jaisay ...

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Yeh nisaab-e-ashqi hay iss ke ramooz kuch auy hein
Isse yaad rakhna asaan hay ise bhool jana kamal hay

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Yun bhi nahi key meray bulaney se aa gaya
Jab reh nahi saka to bahaney se aa gaya
Kya la-ta'luqi sey hua faida humein
Kya uske hath baat barhaney se aa gaya...

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yeh kon phir say inhien raston main chorh gaya
abhi abhi to azab-e-safer say nikla tha

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Aik mud'dat se tere yaad na aai hum ko
aur hum bhool ga'e ho tumhae aisa bhe nahi

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nehi nehi yeh khaber dushmenon nay di hogi
woh ayai ,aa k chalay gayai,milay bhi nehi

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ye ajeeb khail hai pyar ka mane ap dekha ye mojza
woh jo lafz meray gumaN main thay woh teri zubaan par agaye

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Yeh naghma fasl-e-gul-o-lalah ka nahiN paband
bahar ho ke khizaaN - laillah-a-ilallah

--Hey

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hum jo hanse hunse k kar sab se miltey haiN
khud se mil kar bohat udaas hotey haiN

"noon"

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Na matlab hai gadai se na khawahish ke shahi ho
Ilahi howe woh jo kuch ke marzi-e-ilahi ho

--Wao

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Woh jo mosmon ka habib tha,meri piasi aankh ka khawab tha
woh wohi ab bhi aziz hay,keray ab bhi dil per hakoumetain

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Na tau gham ki dhoop jala saki na tau mausmooN ka asar hua
woh meri wafa ka hi phool tha jo abhi talak hai khila hua
meri baat aur hai choRiye maiN aseer-e-jazba-e-ishq hooN
zara apne dil ko bhi dekhiye, yeh bataye isse kya hua

--Alif

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Apni afsurdha mizaaji kaa buraa ho k Faraz
waqayaa koi bhi ho aankh ko bhar jaana hai

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Yeh jurm kam hai ke sachai ka bharm rakha hai
saza tau honi thi mujh ko mere bayaN ke ba'd

--Daal

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Dayaar-e-yaar ki galyoN meiN ja key rakh aaey
humaarey haath meiN jitney wafa key moti thay

Ye*

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Ya he nahi ka hamain toor kar giya hai koyee
Usay behi khud ko bohat dair joorna hoo ga

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Aya hi tha khyaal kay ankhain chalak gaye
ansoo kisi ki yaad main kitnay kareeb hain