Bait Bazi Part - LXVIII

Galaxy · May 12, 2003, 2:25am

Aa dost! lab-e-kosae ka moqa na dey mujhe
afsana meray dil ka bara dardnaak hai

Dilsay · May 12, 2003, 6:03am

*Ya he nahi ka hamain toor kar giya hai koyee
Usay bhi khud ko bohat dair joorna hoo ga
*

Dania · May 12, 2003, 7:08am

*Aaj phir tum nazar nahi aai
Phir tamanna kay phool murjhai
*

Dilsay · May 12, 2003, 7:19am

yaa mujhe afsar-e-shaahaa na banaayaa hotaa
yaa meraa taaj gadaayaa na banaayaa hotaa

Galaxy · May 12, 2003, 4:53pm

Arz-o-sama kahan teri was'at ko paa sakey
Mera hi dil hai woh ke jahan tu sama sakey

Dilsay · May 13, 2003, 7:05am

yaa to miT jaa_iye yaa miTaa diijiye
kiijiye jab bhii saudaa kharaa kiijiye

Galaxy · May 13, 2003, 10:01pm

Yuun tu shaakh sey pattey gira nahi kartey
Bichar ke log ziada jiya nahi kartey

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 14, 2003, 2:36am

yeh souch hai! agar yaqeen hota palt kar teray annay ka
to pohlo ke trha hum bhi tere rah mein bekhar jatay

NExt: Yeh

Galaxy · May 14, 2003, 2:40am

Yeh tughyaani tu kiya hai hum bhanwar bhi paar kar jaatey
Jo hota muntazir humara koi dosri jaanib

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 14, 2003, 2:45am

bahdor to nahi lakin humein acha nahi lagta
kese ke koof se apna makaan tabdeel karna

Next:Alif

Twister · May 14, 2003, 2:45am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Galaxy: *
**Yeh tughyaani tu kiya hai hum bhanwar bhi paar kar jaatey
Jo hota muntazir humara koi dosri jaanib*
[/QUOTE]

Wah ji wah.....aapkey mukabley mein to yahan koi sher karney wala nahi.

Very nice. Keep going

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 14, 2003, 2:47am

just jokking:D

Galaxy · May 14, 2003, 2:48am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by ghazal kisi ke: *
bahdor to nahi lakin humein acha nahi lagta
kese ke koof se apna makaan tabdeel karna

Next:Alif
[/QUOTE]

Us key nazdeek gham-e-tark-e-wafa kuch bhi nahi
Mutma'in aisa hai woh jaisey kuch hua hi nahi

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 14, 2003, 2:50am

^whats the last word:konfused:
Noon or something else

Galaxy · May 14, 2003, 2:51am

noon

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 14, 2003, 2:55am

na aye hain yaadein na anso ab nikltay hain
bohut muskel se meray din ab mere jaa guzartay hain
suna hai mere yaadon ko to ne bhi hai bohla dala
suna hai phir bhi tere aankhon mein sawan tehrtay hain

Next: Noon

Galaxy · May 14, 2003, 2:57am

Nazuki sey jo utha sakti na ho kajal ka baar
Un sabak palkon pe bethay rah ka bojhal ghubaar

Next: Rey

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 14, 2003, 3:06am

raia kare, qadorat aur nafrat ke fiza mein
Alam mujhko mohabbat ka utahna chahaye tha

Next:Alif
That ‘rey’ was pretty hard:bummer:

Dilsay · May 14, 2003, 5:00am

Agar choop chap tum dekhoo tu dum aram say niklay
Idahar hum hichki latay hain udhar tum roonay lagtay hoo

_Nazish · May 14, 2003, 2:00pm

dilsay that was a zalim sher :-(

vafaa ke bhes me.n ko_ii raqiib-e-shahar bhii hai
hazar! ke shahar ke qaatil tabiib-e-shahar bhii hai

Faraz