Bait Bazi Part - LXVIII

Sehar · May 10, 2003, 7:27pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
We should follow urdu alphabets.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.
Shuriya

Sehar · May 10, 2003, 7:28pm

Last shay'r posted by Zawanfira

Nafraton ko saha jaye kaise, yeh zehar aisa hai
Jo utarta nahe hai dil mein, Yeh tu saraeyyat kar jata hai rooh mein

waseemzks · May 10, 2003, 7:31pm

hello

its waseem ,welcomes you to make the nice set up.

its realy very good

punjabi_kuri · May 10, 2003, 7:32pm

Nash-e-mann hoo na hoo yeh tu falak ka mashghala thehraa
Kay doo tinkay jahan par dekhana bijli giraa dayna

Amarbail1 · May 10, 2003, 9:15pm

Ulfat ka jab kisi ne naam liya ro paray
Apni wafa ka soch ke anjaam ro paray

Next: Ye

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 10, 2003, 11:29pm

ye bhi momkin hain raho aankhon mein ansoo ke trha
yeh bhi momkin hain ke khabhi yaad na ao usko

Next: Waoo

Amarbail1 · May 10, 2003, 11:34pm

Woh jis ke naqsh-e-qadam se chirag jalte thay
Jalay chirag tu khud ban gaya dhuwaan woh shaks

Next: Seen / S

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 10, 2003, 11:39pm

sub dost meray muntazir parda sab thay
din mein to safer karnay mein deqat bohtu thee
barish makee duaoo mein namee annkh ke mil jayay
jazbay ke kahbhi itne rafaqat bhi bohtu thee

next: yeh

Amarbail1 · May 10, 2003, 11:42pm

Yeh dukh nahee ke andhairoon se sulhaa ki hum ne
Malaal tu yeh hai ke ab subha ki talab bhi nahee

Next: Noon

_Nazish · May 10, 2003, 11:43pm

Na Gubaar me.n na gulaab me.n mujhe dekhanaa
mere dard kii aab-o-tab me.n mujhe dekhanaa

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 10, 2003, 11:48pm

apne tanhae meray naam pe abad karay
kon ho ga jo mujhe us ke trha yaad karay
dil ajab sher ke jis per bhi kohla dar iska
woh musafer ise her simat se barbad karay

next: yeh

Amarbail1 · May 10, 2003, 11:49pm

Yeh taza phool kitab mein kis ka hai
Sukhey phool to hamarey they
Gairon se khuby kia gila karen ham
Zakham dene waley dost hamarey they

Next: Ye

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 10, 2003, 11:51pm

ye yahee dil the ke trsta tha marasam ke liye
ab yehee tarq-e-taluq ke bahanay mangay

next: Ye

_Nazish · May 10, 2003, 11:54pm

yaade.n chalii.n Khayaal chalaa ashk-e-tar chale
lekar payaam-e-shauq ka_ii naamabar chale

'ye'

Amarbail1 · May 10, 2003, 11:56pm

Yehi nahee ke mujhe jeenay ki khwahish hai
Mein tere wastay khud ko bhi haar sakta hoon
Mujhe yaqeen tu nahee magar yehi sach hai
Mere tere wastay umrain guzaar sakta hoon

Next: ** Noon**

_Nazish · May 10, 2003, 11:58pm

naavak a.ndaaz jidhar diidaa-e-jaanaa.N ho.nge
niim-bismil ka_ii ho.nge ka_ii bejaa.N ho.nge

'ye'

Amarbail1 · May 11, 2003, 12:01am

Yeh gham nahee ke tum mujhe bhool jaaoge
Dukh tu yeh hai ke tum bahut yaad aaoge

Next: Ye

ghazal_kisi_ke · May 11, 2003, 12:01am

yeh hamare badnaseebe nahi to aur kia hai
ke uske hoay hum jo na ho saka hamara

next: Alif

Amarbail1 · May 11, 2003, 12:04am

Aankhain baras rahi hain ke baadal bhare huwe
Us bad'gumaan ke dil mein ab tak ghubaar hai

Next: Alif

_Nazish · May 11, 2003, 12:05am

aag hai paanii hai miTTii hai havaa hai mujh me.n
aur phir maananaa pa.Dataa hai ke Khudaa hai mujh me.n

'noon'