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I think everyone’s familiar with the rules so here we go again…
aaina-dar tagafl hai meri khamoshi
kuch na kehna bhi ik andaz-e-byan hota hai
YuuN Lagta hay jaesay abhi laut aaye gaa
jaatay houey charagh bujha kar nahiN geya
Alfaaz ki soorat meiN sakooN maang lo mujh sey
ehsaas ka sooraj to yahaaN doob chalaa hey
"ye"
Amal jee shair buhat umdaa he :k:
*Yeh nazar to buhat burri shaye he
kyoon main her ik nazar mein rehta hooN
Saad pather ko moom kar dooN ga
main bhi shehr-e-hunar meiN rehta hooN*
Yaad-e- maazi azaab hay Ya-Rub!
CheehN Lay mujh say hafiza mera
Shukriya Rameesha ji :)
Us shokh ney chun chun ke wohi peirr jalaaey
pat-jhartt ke mosam meiN jo shaadaab bohat they
"ye"
Mery pyar ki shiddat dekho jab bhi ashk bahaooN
meri aankh meiN aa jata he teri aankh ka kajal
Koi acha sa She'r sunaaiN aap donoN,Hum Bore Ho rahay heiN:-(
Lehraa rahi hey barf ki chaadar hataa ke ghaas
sooraj ki shey pe tinkey bhi be'baak ho gaey
"ye"
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*Originally posted by GuL-e-Tasbeeh: *
Koi acha sa She'r sunaaiN aap donoN,Hum Bore Ho rahay heiN:-(
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sheir to kai achey likhey heiN hum ney...lekin aap ka maayaar hi itna ooNcha hey ke wahaaN tak pohNctey pohNctey hamaaey sheir thak jaatey heiN :(
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*Originally posted by Amal: *
sheir to kai achey likhey heiN hum ney...lekin aap ka maayaar hi itna ooNcha hey ke wahaaN tak pohNctey pohNctey hamaaey sheir thak jaatey heiN :(
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Phir humara Maayaar ooNcha nahiN hoga maybe :-(
Ya-Rab meri sochoN ko wuh ijaz-e-asar day
MaiN toot bhi jaoN tou mera naam amarr ho
wao*
nice sheir Gul:k:…with it am signing off
“ye”
^mujee bhi yeh shair behad pasand he :)
Yeh kahan ki dosti he keh baney hain dost naseh
koyi charasaaz hota koyi ghumgusaar hota
.
Aaj kya baat hay kay phooL ka rang teri haNsi say milta hay
bhuuL jaata huuN ghum uss kay wuh kuch is saadagi say milta hay
YoNhi hamisha khilaye hain hum nay agg may phool
Na inn ki haar naye hay , na apni jeet naye
ye khush nazri khush nazar aaney ke leeye hey
andar ki udaasi ko chupaaney ke leeye hey
"ye"
Yahan EhL-e-muhabat Umr bhar barbaad rehtey haiN
yeh darya hay issay kacha gharra acha nahiN Lagtaa
maiN ab chaahat ki uss manziL par Aa puhanchi huuN
terii janib kisii ka dekhna achaa nahiN Lagtaa..........!
alif
aaNkh sey aaNkh mila, baat banaanat kiuN hey
tu agar mujh sey khafa hey to chupaata kiuN hey
gair lagta hey na apnoN ki tarhaN milta hey
tu zamaaney ki tarhaN mujh ko sataata kiuN hey
"ye"