Bait Bazi - Part LXIV

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Rules of Bait Bazi:

  1. Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
  2. One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
  3. Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
  4. If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
  5. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
  6. We should follow urdu alphabets.
  7. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
    which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
  8. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
    will be allowed.
  9. Avoid posting film songs.
    Shuriya :slight_smile:
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yooN arz-o-talab se kab aay dil, pathar dil pani hotay hain
tum laakh raza kee kho dalo, kab kho-ay sitam gir jaati hai

'ye'

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YaqeeN gumaan sey baahar to ho nahi sakta
nazar khayaal sey aagey to jaa nahi sakti!
diloN ki ramz faqt ahl-e-dard jaantey heiN
teri samajh meiN meri baat aa nahi sakti

"ye"

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ye ajeeb kheail hai pyar ka mane ap dekha ye mojza
woh jo lafz mere gumaan main thay woh teri zubaan par agaye

ye

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ye weham nahi to kya hey ye gumaaN nahi to kya heY
ye jo dil sey utth raha hey ye dhuwaaN nahi to kya heY

"ye"

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Ye shab e faraq,ye beybasi, hian qadaam qadaam peh udhasiyaaN
Mera saath koie nah dey saka,Mere Hasratain DhowaaN DhowaaN

noon

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nazar milaa na sake us se us nigaah ke baad
vahii hai haal hamaaraa jo ho gunaah ke baad

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dil kii siyaahiyoN meiN tujheY DhuNDhtaa huaa
palakoN pe aa rukaa hai sitaaroN kaa qaafilaa

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ik Roz wuh Aa jaaiN gay yeh diL ko yaQeen hay
TaseeR meiN dhaL jaaey gii ik Roz Duaa bhii

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ye na thi hamri qismat kay wisal-e-yaar hota
gar aur jetay rahtay yehi intazar hota

alif

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Abhi to baat karo hum sey dostooN ki tarah
phir ikhtelaf key pehloo nikaltey rehna
Qateel eik hi shughal pasand he hameeN
kheyal-e-yaar ko shairooN mein dhaaltey rehna

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[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Rameesha: *

*Abhi to baat karo hum sey dostooN ki tarah
phir ikhtelaf key pehloo nikaltey rehna
Qateel eik hi shughal pasand he hameeN
kheyal-e-yaar ko shairooN mein dhaaltey rehna
[/QUOTE]

beautiful sher Rameesha g

aasmanoN meiN wo buhat masroof hei..
ya pHir baaNjh honay lagay alfaaz manajaatoN ke

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thankoo NJ... aap ka ^shair bhi buhat khobsorat he ...

*YooN kiss tarah katey ga karhi dhoop ka safar
sar per kheyal-e-yaar ki chadar hi ley chaleeN

ranj-e-safar ki koyi nishani to paas ho
torhi si khaak-e-kocha-e-dilbar hi ley chaleeN*

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again nice one Rameesha g

na jaane aaj ye kis kaa Khayaal aayaa hai
khushii kaa rang liye har malaal aayaa hai

vo ek shaKhs ki haasil na tha jo Khud ko bhi
miTaa kisii pe to kaisaa bahaal aayaa hai

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NJ :)

Yeh teri yaad he ya meri azziyat-koshi
eik nishtar sa rag-e-jaaN key qareeb aaj bhi he

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ye quRbatiN barey imtihaN laiti haiN
kisi se wasta rakhna tu dooR ka rakhna
tal'uqaat kabhi aik se nahi rahteY
usay ganwa k be jeenay ka hosla rakhNa

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Udasii bhi Adam Ehsaas ki ek dolat hay
basa aukaat weeranay haseeN maloom hotay haiN

Next: noon*

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Na kissi ankh ka noor hoon na kissi kaye dil ka qarar hoon
Jo kissi kaam na aa sakaye mein woh aik musht-e-ghabar hoon

Noon

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Na kar sawaal dar-e-Ghair per gada ke tarha
k koi be-gharaz nahi faqat Khuda ke tarha

"hy"

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Hamari jaan par dohra azaab hai "Mohsin"
kay dekhna nahi hum ko sochna bhi hai

ye