Bait Bazi Part -- LXII

Rules of Bait Bazi:

  1. Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
  2. One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
  3. Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
  4. If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
  5. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
  6. We should follow urdu alphabets.
  7. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
    which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
  8. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
    will be allowed.
  9. Avoid posting film songs.
    Shuriya :slight_smile:

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[This message has been edited by ~Sehar~ (edited July 27, 2002).]

Ye kia sab se byaaN dil ki haalateN karni
Faraaz tujh ko na aayiN muhabbateN karni

Thanks Sirfarosh :)

[quote]
Originally posted by ~Sehar~:
**Ye kia sab se byaaN dil ki haalateN karni
Faraaz tujh ko na aayiN muhabbateN karni

Thanks Sirfarosh :)**
[/quote]

Yahi Ne-raNg-e-Aaalam hai to phir ik din Andheraa hai
Zameen meiN kaisse kaisse ChaaNd pinHaaN hote jaate haiN

Na jane duubne wala kya keh gaya hai moujoun se
kae moujein ajj tak sar phorti phirti hain sahil sae


~Mere hathoon ki lakeeroon ke izaafe hain gawah
main nae pathar ki tarha khud ko tarasha hai bohat~

OoOoOoO

**smile**


Nice shair Sehar!

ye qurb kyaa hai ke tuu saamane hai aur hame.n
shumaar abhii se judaa_ii kii sa'ate.n karanii

and Complete Poem of Ahmed Faraz

ye kyaa ke sab se bayaa.N dil kii haalate.n karanii
'Faraz' tujh ko na aa_ii.n muhabbate.n karanii

ye qurb kyaa hai ke tuu saamane hai aur hame.n
shumaar abhii se judaa_ii kii sa'ate.n karanii

ko_ii Khudaa ho ke patthar jise bhii ham chaahe.n
tamaam umr usii kii ibaadate.n karanii

sab apane apanee qariine se muntazir us ke
kisii ko shukr kisii ko shikaayate.n karanii

ham apane dil se hai.n majabuur aur logon ko
zaraa sii baat pe barpaa qayaamate.n karanii

mile.n jab un se to mubaham sii guftaguu karanaa
phir apane aap se sau-sau vazaahate.n karanii

ye log kaise magar dushmanii nibhaate.n hai.n
hamii.n ko raas na aa_ii.n muhabbate.n karanii

kabhii 'Faraz' naye mausamo.n me.n ro denaa
kabhii talaash puraanii raqaabate.n karanii


[This message has been edited by Eastern Thoughts (edited July 28, 2002).]

Yehi berukhi mar dalegi Nasir
ke mehfil mein hamko woh kam dekhtay hai_n


~It hurts to love someone and not to be loved in return, But what is more painful is to love someone and never find the courage to let that person know how you feel.~

naqsh-e-Khayaal dil se miTaayaa nahii.n hanoz
bedard mai.n ne tujhako bhulaayaa nahii.n hanoz

behosh hoke jald tujhe hosh aa gayaa
mai.n badanasiib hosh me.n aayaa nahii.n hanoz

hanoz means, as yet.


thori dair tu huns laynay daytay.....

** Zard ChehroN ki KitaabeiN bhi haiN kitni maqbool
Tarjame in ke JahaaN bhar ki ZabaanoN meiN mile**


ye aur baat terii galii me.n na aaye.n ham
lekin ye kyaa ki shahar teraa chho.D jaaye.n ham

be_nuur ho chukii hai bahut shahar kii fazaa
taariik raasto.n me.n kahii.n kho na jaaye.n ham

us ke ba_Gair aaj bahut jii udaas hai
'Jalib' chalo kahii.n se use Dhuu.NDh laaye.n ham



thori dair tu huns laynay daytay.....

meraa Khaamosh rah kar bhi unheN sab kuch suna dena
zabaaN se kuch na kahna dekh kar aaNsuu bahaa denaa


~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

"agar tum mil jao zamaana chor dain ge hum
tumhain paakar zamaane bhar se rishta tor dainge hum

juda kia karainge hum ko tum se zamaane wale
tumhain paakar zamaane bhar ka rukh mor dainge hum."


"i LoVe ThE SOUND Of A BrEaKiNg gLaSS"


mariiz-e-muhabbat u.nhii.n kaa fasaanaa
sunaataa rahaa dam nikalate nikalate
magar zikr-e-shaam-e-alam jab bhii aayaa
chiraaG-e-sahar bujh gayaa jalate jalate



thori dair tu huns laynay daytay.....

Yeh Ehad wo hai keh meri Wafaa ke QisoN meiN
Teri Jafaa ki Hakayaat bhi biyaan hogi

yun hi be-sabab na phira karo
kisi shaam ghar bhi raha karo
yeh ghazal ki sach kitaab hai
isey chupke chupke parhaa karo..


"i LoVe ThE SOUND Of A BrEaKiNg gLaSS"

waah

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Wo Aagehi ke Sumandar kahaaN haiN jin ke liye
Tamaam Umr yeh Piyaase Safar meiN rehte haiN

na iqraar karta hai na izhaar karta hai woh
phir bhi dil main mere liye ulfat rakhta hai woh
yeh kaisi chaahat hai yeh kaisa pyar hai uska
faqat samjha hoon to itna zamaana se darta hai woh..


"i LoVe ThE SOUND Of A BrEaKiNg gLaSS"

[This message has been edited by ShaRaRa (edited July 29, 2002).]

HameiN bhi yaad rakheiN jab likheiN tehreer-e-gulshan
ke ham ne bhi lutaya hai chaman meiN aashiyaaN apna

Next - Alif

aye baad_e_saba kuch tu suna mehmaan jo aanay waalay hain
kaliaan na bichaana rahon may hum aankhain bichaanay waalay hain.


CaN u GiVe Me DiReCtIoNs tO Ur hEaRt Im KiNdA lOsT iN uR eYeS!!!

NahiN be-hijaab woh chand sa ke kisi nazar ka asar na ho
usse itni garmi-e-shauq se baRi deir se taka na karo

Next -- Wao

Chehery Badal Badal Key Mil Rahey Hainn Loog
Aisa Bura Salook Meri Sadgi Key Sath