Bait Bazi Part---LXI

Sehar · April 24, 2002, 8:36pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
We should follow urdu alphabets.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.

Shuriya

Sehar · April 24, 2002, 8:48pm

na thee zameen mein was'at meri nazar jaisi
badan thaka bhi nahi aur safar tamaam hua

'alif'

chand_chehra · April 24, 2002, 9:30pm

*Aek wisaal ki baarish sey wo saarey shikwey dho de ga
yaani merey saath lipatt ke, kuch naa kahey ga, ro dey ga

guybrush · April 25, 2002, 1:47pm

ada -e- husn ki masoomiyaat ko kam ker de
guneehghaar nazar ko hijiab aata ha

(Faiz Ahmad Faiz)

in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim

Ek_Shairah · April 25, 2002, 3:21pm

yaadein chaleen khayal chala ashk-e-tar chale
lekar payaam-e-shauq kai naamabar chale
dil ko sanbhaalate rahe har haadsay pe ham
ab kya karen keh khud tere gesu bikhar chale

Life is like a piano --- what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

system · April 25, 2002, 3:27pm

ye agar shaher may niklay to bhatak jaein gay
meray kamray may andheron ko sahulat hai bohat

Ek_Shairah · April 25, 2002, 4:48pm

tumhen bhool jaoon ye hota nahin
koi vaqt ho dard sota nahin
na ho jaao bad_naam tum is liye
main ro ro ke daaman bhigotaa nahin

Life is like a piano --- what you get out of it,
Depends on how you play it.

guybrush · April 26, 2002, 4:59pm

na deed ha na sukhan , ab na koi hurf ha na payaam
koi bhi heela i taskeen naheen aur aas bahut ha
umeed i yaar ,nazar ka mizaj ,derd ka rang
tum aaj kuch bhi na poocho kay dil udaas bahut ha :/

in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim

_TaNhAyAaN · April 27, 2002, 5:07am

~ankh nam na kar mere dard ki khatir ai mahboob
tere ek ansoo per mere hazar dard qurban hon~

~~Khud ko yun mahsur kar baithi hun apni zaat mein
manzilain charon taraf hai rasta koee nahin~~

guybrush · April 28, 2002, 7:26am

naujawani ajeeb nasha ha
chaoon mein bhi badan sulagta ha

(sagher siddiqui)

in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim

Maheen2002 · April 28, 2002, 10:40am

~ye sheeshay'ye sapnay'ye rishtay'ye dhagay
kisay kiya khabar hai kaha toot jaein
mohabbat ke daryaa mai tinkay wafa ke
najaanay ye kis moar par dhoob jaein~

Next word: ye

---~---Maria---~---
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

_TaNhAyAaN · April 28, 2002, 5:22pm

yooN bichaRnaa bhi bahut AasaaN na thaa us say magar
jaatay jaatay us-kaa woh muR kar dobaarah daekhnaa

~~Khud ko yun mahsur kar baithi hun apni zaat mein
manzilain charon taraf hai rasta koee nahin~~

guybrush · April 29, 2002, 2:02pm

aaj to be sabab udaas ha jee
ishq hota to koi baat bhi thi

in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim

Maheen2002 · April 29, 2002, 7:37pm

~youn galat tu nahichehroan ka tasur bhi magar
log waisay bhi nahi jaisay nazar atay hain~

---~---Maria---~---
~Kiya haaq wo jeena hai jo apnay hi liyay ho
Khud mit kar kisi aur ko mitnay se bacha lay~

chand_chehra · April 29, 2002, 10:16pm

*

nahi ke arsa-e-gardaab hi ganeemat tha
magar yaqeeN to dilaao yehi kinaarey heiN

MÙhb@t kÀ ÃnÒkhå SîÌSîÎã Hãï
KÆhî ý@$®Úb Káhï kÃ®BàÎå H@ï

_TaNhAyAaN · April 29, 2002, 10:26pm

~~Nahin bayan hoti mohabbat lufzoun mein
K is ko sumujhna hai to dekh in ankhoun mein~~

~~Khud ko yun mahsur kar baithi hun apni zaat mein
manzilain charon taraf haiN rasta koee nahin~~

magar yae to koi n a janay meri manzil hain kahaaaaan!!;~)

Destinee · April 29, 2002, 11:18pm

nikalna khald say aadam ka suntay aye hain lekin
boht be-aabru ho kar teray koochay say hum niklay

"y/ye"

Gemini_the_Great · April 29, 2002, 11:57pm

yay alag bat je tu afsha na howa tu warna
maine tujhay kitna mehsos kiya teray baad
meri dukhti hoye ankhon se gawahaye lena
maine socha tujhay apnay se siwa tear baad

Mohsin Naqvi
next: "Daal"

Mahee · April 30, 2002, 3:39am

"daal" say sheir hazir a.

dil k lutney ka sabab poch rahey ho mujh say
is qissay may kia rakha hai, ye kahani phir sahi

"ye"

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

guybrush · April 30, 2002, 9:19am

yaroo kahan tak aur muhabbat nibhaoon mein
do mujh ko bad-dua kay usay bhool jaaon mein

in my dreams i was drowning my sorrows , but my sorrows learned to swim

[This message has been edited by guybrush (edited April 30, 2002).]