Bait Bazi Part -- LX

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waqf-e-harmaan-o-yaas rehta hey
dil hey ke aksar udaas rehta hey
tum to gham de kar bhool jatey ho
mujh ko ehsaan ka paas rehta hey
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN...

Yeh aandhera, yeh rooshni kya he
aaoo socheeN yeh zindgi kya he
her qadam par fareeb detey ho
banda-parwar! yeh dosti kya he

[This message has been edited by Rameesha (edited March 22, 2002).]

yoo'n na mil mujh say khafa ho jesay
saath chal, moj-e-saba ho jesay
log yoo'n dekh k hans detey hain
tu mujhey bhool gya ho jesay


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

Yoo’n Dosti Ke Naam Ko Rusva Na Kar
Tark-e-Ta’alluq Ka Charcha Na Kar
Jurm-o-Sitam Ka Paas bhi Ulfat Mein Shart hai
Palkon ko Aansos’n se Bigoyaa na Kar

rekhtey hain jo o'ron k lia pyar ka jazba
wo log kabhi toot ker bikhra nahi kertey


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

yaad a mazi azab hy ya rab
cheen ly hafza mera.

"alif"

[quote]
Originally posted by KHAMOSHI:
**yaad a mazi azab hy ya rab
cheen ly hafza mera.

"alif"**
[/quote]

Khmoshi sis the second misrah of this shair is
cheen lay mujh se hafza mera

achi hoon ya buri hoon khud apnay liyay hoon
main khod ko nahin dekhti auraon ki nazr se

next: "YaY"

I have a Q sehar. Can we post a sher written by a guppie?

[This message has been edited by &Passionate (edited March 24, 2002).]

[This message has been edited by &Passionate (edited March 24, 2002).]

yay dill yay asabe ki nagri maskan sochon wahmon ka
soch raha hoon is nagri main tu kab mehman howa

Mohsin Naqvi

Next: "Alif"

oye that was fine.. I replied ur shair and u edit it

http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/mad.gif

apney under aansooin ka ik derya hai rawaain
aankh k bhegein kinarey, ye zarori to nahi


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

nahi noumeed iqbal apni kishtay weeran say

zara nam ho to yeh matti bari zarkhaiz hai saqi

yoin na mil mujh sa khafa ho jesay
saath chal, moj-e-saba ho jesay


mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

~ye zara zara si baat par tarhan tarhan ke azaab kiun?
Jo kisi se bhi khafa na ho, mujhey us khuda ki talash hai~~

Amal

Next=>yeh

yay basti hai sitm parwardagan ki
yahan koi kisi se kam nahin hai
jo koi sun sakay Amjad tu duniya
ik bazgasht-e gham nahin hai

Amjad Islam Amjad

next: "YaY"

yeh zid kay aaj na aaye aur aaye bin na rahay

qaza say shikwa hamain kis qadar hai kya kahiyay

Yuun hi be-sabab na phira karo, kisi shaam ghar bhi rahaa karoo
Vo ghazal ki sachchi kitaab hai, use chupke chupke padaa karo

woh mila tu sadiyun ke baad bhi meray lab pe koi gila na tha
usay meri chup ne rula diya jisay guftuugu main kamal tha

next:"Alif"

andhairee raat hoti hai, dunya mast soti hai
meri gamgeen ankho mai teri tasveer hoti hai


***kiss kiss ne, kiss kiss ko, kiss kiss tarha kiss kiya,
Ek woh hai jis ne har miss ko kiss kiya,
aur ek hum hai jis ne har kiss ko miss kiya


yaad kar woh din keh her ik halqa teray daam ka

intizar-e-said main ik deeda-e-be khaab tha