Bait Bazi Part -- LX

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Rules of Bait Bazi:

  1. Shair should be genuine and not a fabricated one.
  2. One “response shair” is allowed per shair.
  3. Dont break the chain and always follow the last posted shair.
  4. If more than one shair is posted in response, follow the last posted shair.
  5. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
  6. We should follow urdu alphabets.
  7. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair. (if it’s “HAMZA” by any chance,
    which could hardly be the case, then also mention the second last alphabet).
  8. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max
    will be allowed.
  9. Avoid posting film songs.

Thank you

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yaadoN kay haashiye bhi bahut ayhum haiN Mohsin
deemak lagi kitaab ko ahista khooliye

'ye'

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Yeh raz-e-bahar-e-gulshan hay iss raz ko samjhay kiya koi
Shabnam ko rulaya phoolon nay ya raat ko shabnam khud roi

~Advice is like caster oil, easy to give hard to swallow!~

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~~Yeh kia ke sub se biyan dil ki halaten karni
Faraz tujhi ko na aayin mohabbatein karni~~

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Yey Dard Kissi Aur Ko Milta Bhi Tu Kaisay?
Yey To Merey HatooN Ki LakirooN Main Likkha Tha

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

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Ab tak hey koi baat mujhey yaad harf harf
ab tak chun rahi hooN kisi guftagu ke phool

MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN...

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dil dharakney ney ka sabab yaad aaya
wo teri yaad thi, ab yaad aaya

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!

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laakhoN ki sunaa tum ne taqadeer saNvari hai
mujh se yahi kah dete ab ke teri baari hai
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sorry i guess we did same time

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* aa dekh mujh se ruuThane vaale tere baGair din bhi guzar gayaa meri shab bhi guzar ga_ii
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Ye kis ney kaha tha ke usey waqf-e-hawaa kar
ab dooNdtey ho kiuN usey mutthi sey urra kar**

MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN...

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Raaz ke raaz ka samjhna koi aasaaN nahi
pehley utar meray ashar ki gahrie meiN

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Nah kissi pe zahm ayyaN koyi, nah kissi ko fikr rafo ki he
nah karam he hum pe habeeb ka, nah nigah hum pe adoo ki he

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yeh udaas udaas se baam-o dar yeh ujar ujar si rah guzr
chalo hum nahin na sahi magar sir-e ku'a yaar koi tu ho

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WaaN woh gharor-e-izz-o-naaz, yaaN yeh hijaab-e-pas-e-wazaa
rah meiN hum mileeN kahaN, bazm meiN woh bulaye kyooN

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na hareef-e jaan na shareek-e ghum shub-e intazaar koi tu ho
kise buzm-e shauk mei lain hum dil-e be-qarar koi tu ho

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Wo geet jo tum ney suna nahi, meri umr bhar ka riyaaz tha
mery dard ki thi wo daastaaN jisey tum haNsi meiN urra gaey
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN...

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yuuN tu ham aagaah the saiyaad ki tadbiir se
ham asir-e-daam-e-gul apani Khudi se ho gaye

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Ye keh ke dil ney merey hosley barrhaaey heiN
ghamoN ki dhoop ke aagey khushi ke saaey heiN
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MeiN pal do pal ka shaaer hooN...

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yuuN sajaa chaNd ki jhalka tere andaaz kaa rang
yuuN fazaa mahki ki badlaa mere hamaraaz kaa rang

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[This message has been edited by Jharooka (edited March 17, 2002).]

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Jharooka jee aap ney "noon" say sheir kehna tha mager aap ney "ye" say keh dya. anyway may ab aap k sheir k last word say sheir kehta hon.

guzer to ja a gi yooin bhi lekin
bohat udaas, bohat bey qaraar guzrey gi

next word is "ye"

mohabat aesa derya hai
k baarish rooth bhi ja a
to pani kum nahi hota!