Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

Rules of Bait Bazi:

1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.

2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).

5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

6. Avoid posting film songs.

last shair posted by ...S.786 was

ye ehtemaam-e-chiraaghaan baja sahi,lekin
seher tu hu nhin sakti diye jalaany say…

ye

yon to galat nahi hai chehron ka tausar bhi magar
log waisay bhi nahi jaise nazar aatay hain

ye again :chai:

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008


ye kesay ay'had hotey haiN uper jo neechay saray ay'had toot'tey haiN
khushi k more pe he koeN aa'khir khawab saa'ray toot'tey haiN
**
"noon"
**

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

Nigah-e-Yaas Ko Neend Aa Rahee Hai
Mexa Pe Ashk Bojhal Ho Gaye Hain

'Noon'

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

na etebaar-e-muhubbat,na ikhtiyaar-e-wafa

koi jafa ko bhi tery taras rahaa hugaa.........

alif

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

Ab Ussay Roz Na Sochoo'n Tou Badan Toott'Ta Hay
Umer Guzree Hay Uski Yaad Ka Nasha Kartay ....!

yay

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008


yaa'dooN ki aa'g maiN meri aa'nkhaiN sulag uthieN
raatooN ko soochnay ki aadat na mujhay

"ye'

Yay din yay raat yay lamhay achay lagtay hain
TumhaiN soochooN to saray sisilay achay lagtay haiN
Bohot dour tk chalna mager phir bhi waheen rehna
Mujhay tum say tumhi tk dairay achay lagtay haiN

"Noon"

Assalamu Alaikum

Naheen tera nashayman, qusr-e-sultani kay gumbad par
Tu shaheen hay, basayra kar, pahaadon kay chataanon par.

"ray"

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

wassalaam,welcom hear

na sawaal-e-wisl,na arz-e-gham,na hikaayaten,na shikaayaten


tery ehd men dil-e-zaar k sabhi ikhtiyaar chaly gayy.................!



ye

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

Yeh hijr hawa bhi dushman hai uss naam k saare rangon kii
wo naam jo maire honton par khushboo ki tarah abad huva

Alif

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

***eraday jin kay pukhta hoon nazar jin ki khuda par ho
talatum khaiz moonjoon se woh ghabraya nahi kartay
"yee"


Yaad Karney Key Siwa Ab Kar Bhi Kya Saktey hAin
BhOol Jaaney Mein tUjhey Nakaam hO Jaaney Key Baad


"Daal"

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

dil mem ab yon tery bhooly huy gham yaad aaty hen

jesy bichray huy kaa,by men sanam aatay haen.......

noon

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

Na jaao uski gum sum saadgi parrr
samandar hai tou wo gehra b hoga

Alif

Ab yay soochooN to bhanwar zehn main par jatay haiN
Kaisay chehray haiN jo miltay haiN bicher jatay haiN
Mousam - e - zard main ek dil ko bachaooN kaisay
Aisi rut maiN to ghanay pair bhi jhar jatay haiN

** " Noon "**

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

Na sahiban-e-junoon hain na ehl-e-kashf-o-kamal
hamaaray ehed mein aayiin saqaaffatein kaisiii....
yeh daur-e-be'hunraan haii bacha rakhoo khud
yahaan sadaqateinn kaisii karaamatein kaisiii....

Yeh

Yay ghum dil ko raas bohot hai
Agerchay bhalay dinooN ki aas bohot hai
Mana k mil nahi saktay tum faslay pay ho
Is dil ka kia kerooN jo udas bohot hai

" Yay "

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

***Yeh Dil Bicharrnay Ka Ghum Bhoolay Tou Neend Aa'ey

Zahan Say Tera Khayal Ja'ey Tou Neend Aa'ey

Humaray Seenay Main Tayree Yadoo'n Ki Roshni Hay

Humaray Andar Bhi Raat Chaa'ey Tou Neend Aa'ey

yay***

re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008

Yeh raaz us parr khulay ga jo khud ko pehchane
ke ikk yaqeen ki manzil bhii hai gumaan ke baad

Daal