Rules of Bait Bazi:
1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
6. Avoid posting film songs.
last shair posted by ...S.786 was
ye ehtemaam-e-chiraaghaan baja sahi,lekin
seher tu hu nhin sakti diye jalaany say…
ye
yon to galat nahi hai chehron ka tausar bhi magar
log waisay bhi nahi jaise nazar aatay hain
ye again
Koyal
August 4, 2008, 3:41am
3
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
ye kesay ay'had hotey haiN uper jo neechay saray ay'had toot'tey haiN
khushi k more pe he koeN aa'khir khawab saa'ray toot'tey haiN
**
"noon"
**
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
Nigah-e-Yaas Ko Neend Aa Rahee Hai
Mexa Pe Ashk Bojhal Ho Gaye Hain
'Noon'
S.786
August 4, 2008, 5:59pm
5
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
na etebaar-e-muhubbat,na ikhtiyaar-e-wafa
koi jafa ko bhi tery taras rahaa hugaa.........
alif
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
Ab Ussay Roz Na Sochoo'n Tou Badan Toott'Ta Hay
Umer Guzree Hay Uski Yaad Ka Nasha Kartay ....!
yay
Koyal
August 5, 2008, 4:19am
7
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
yaa'dooN ki aa'g maiN meri aa'nkhaiN sulag uthieN
raatooN ko soochnay ki aadat na mujhay
"ye'
Sheal
August 5, 2008, 6:06am
8
Yay din yay raat yay lamhay achay lagtay hain
TumhaiN soochooN to saray sisilay achay lagtay haiN
Bohot dour tk chalna mager phir bhi waheen rehna
Mujhay tum say tumhi tk dairay achay lagtay haiN
"Noon"
Qudsi
August 5, 2008, 7:46am
9
Assalamu Alaikum
Naheen tera nashayman, qusr-e-sultani kay gumbad par
Tu shaheen hay, basayra kar, pahaadon kay chataanon par.
"ray"
S.786
August 5, 2008, 7:51am
10
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
wassalaam,welcom hear
na sawaal-e-wisl,na arz-e-gham,na hikaayaten,na shikaayaten
tery ehd men dil-e-zaar k sabhi ikhtiyaar chaly gayy.................!
ye
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
Yeh hijr hawa bhi dushman hai uss naam k saare rangon kii
wo naam jo maire honton par khushboo ki tarah abad huva
Alif
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
***eraday jin kay pukhta hoon nazar jin ki khuda par ho
talatum khaiz moonjoon se woh ghabraya nahi kartay
"yee"
_dArd
August 5, 2008, 2:18pm
13
Yaad Karney Key Siwa Ab Kar Bhi Kya Saktey hAin
BhOol Jaaney Mein tUjhey Nakaam hO Jaaney Key Baad
"Daal"
S.786
August 5, 2008, 5:39pm
14
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
dil mem ab yon tery bhooly huy gham yaad aaty hen
jesy bichray huy kaa,by men sanam aatay haen.......
noon
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
Na jaao uski gum sum saadgi parrr
samandar hai tou wo gehra b hoga
Alif
Sheal
August 5, 2008, 8:33pm
16
Ab yay soochooN to bhanwar zehn main par jatay haiN
Kaisay chehray haiN jo miltay haiN bicher jatay haiN
Mousam - e - zard main ek dil ko bachaooN kaisay
Aisi rut maiN to ghanay pair bhi jhar jatay haiN
** " Noon "**
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
Na sahiban-e-junoon hain na ehl-e-kashf-o-kamal
hamaaray ehed mein aayiin saqaaffatein kaisiii....
yeh daur-e-be'hunraan haii bacha rakhoo khud
yahaan sadaqateinn kaisii karaamatein kaisiii....
Yeh
Sheal
August 6, 2008, 4:53am
18
Yay ghum dil ko raas bohot hai
Agerchay bhalay dinooN ki aas bohot hai
Mana k mil nahi saktay tum faslay pay ho
Is dil ka kia kerooN jo udas bohot hai
" Yay "
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
***Yeh Dil Bicharrnay Ka Ghum Bhoolay Tou Neend Aa'ey
Zahan Say Tera Khayal Ja'ey Tou Neend Aa'ey
Humaray Seenay Main Tayree Yadoo'n Ki Roshni Hay
Humaray Andar Bhi Raat Chaa'ey Tou Neend Aa'ey
yay ***
re: Bait Bazi Month of September, 2008
Yeh raaz us parr khulay ga jo khud ko pehchane
ke ikk yaqeen ki manzil bhii hai gumaan ke baad
Daal