Bait Bazi--Month of Nov---2007

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Rules of Bait Bazi:

  1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.

  2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

  3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

  4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).

  5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

  6. Avoid posting film songs.

Ye saanihaa bhi muhabbat mein barhaa guzara Ke us ne haal bhi pucha to Aankh bhar aayi

“Ye”

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Re: Bait Bazi--Month of Nov---2007


ye tu hai ya loota huwa koi khyaal
koi to aas paas hai ye dil bahut udaas hai

"ye"

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ye jo raat din ka hai khail sa, issay daikh iss per yaqeen na kar
nahin aks koi bhi mustaqil sar-e-aaina, ussay bhool ja

alif

Timepaas
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Iss Qadar Musalsal Theen Shiddatain Judai Ki
Aaj Mainay Pehli Baar Uss Se Bewafai Ki

'Ye'

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yon to galat nahi hai chehron ka tausar bi magar log waise bhi nahi jaise nazar aate hain

ye :chai:
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Ye Baat Kisi Ko Nahi Maloom Ke Momin
Qaari Nazar Aata Hai Haqeeqat Main Hai Qur'aan

'Noon'

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Nahi ab to koi malaal bhi , kisi wapsi ak khayaal bhi
gham-e-bekasi ne mita diya merey dil mein tha agar koi
tujhey kya khabar ke raat bhar , tujhey dekh paney ko ik nazar
raha saath chand ke muntazir teri khirkhiyoo'n ke idher koi

ye

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Ye Aur Baat Ke Tum Se Gila Nahi Kertay
Malaal Kion Nahi Hota Malaal Hota Hai

'Ye'

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Yeh theek hai koi marta nahi judai main Khuda kisi ko kisi se magar juda na karay

:naak:

ye
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Ye Kis Maqaam Pe Soojhi Tujhay Bichharnay Ki
Ke Abb To Jakay Kaheen Din Sanwarnay Walay Thay

'Ye'

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Yeh kon chupkay se tanhaaiyo'n main kehta hai Mere baghair sukooon umer bhar nahi milna

:naak:

Alif
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Acha Khaasa Bethay Bethay Gum Ho Jata Hoon
Abb Main Aksar Main Nahi Rehta Tum Ho Jata Hoon

'Noon'

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Na socha na samjha na sikha na jana
Mujhe aa gaya Khud ba Khud dil lagana
Zara dekh kar apna jalwa Dikhana
Simat kar yahin aa na jaye zamana

"Alif"

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Aise Raha Karo ke Karain Log Aarzu
Aise Chalan Chalo Ke Zamana Misaal De

'Ye'

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Yeh tairi b ankhon ka qasoor hai
main tanha gunehgar tou nahinn

Noon

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Nee'yat-e-Shoq Bhar Na Jaye Kaheen
Tuu Bhi Dil Se Utar Na Jaye Kaheen

'Noon'

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Nasir buhat si khvahishain dil mein hain be-qarar
laikin kahaan sey launn woh be-fikrrr zindagiii..

Yeh

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Ye Acha Hai Ke Aapsa Ke Bharam Na Tootnay Payen
Kabhi Bhi Doston Ko Aazma Ker Kuch Nahi Milta

‘Alif’

PS: Shumaisa.. :salam: .. Kesi ho aap?? meri ghazal parho na jaker Shora-e-GS main..

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Us say kab hum nay mulaqat ka wadah chaha
durr reh kay to ussay aor bhii ziadaah chahaa

Alif

Ws.. main theek hon, aap ko mairi yaad sirf tab aati hai jab Koi poetry parhwani hoti hai.. :naraz:

Parhti hon.. :frowning:

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nahi naa.. aap mujh se baat he nahi kerti.. :frowning:

em sorry na.. aapko aisa laga.. :hugz:

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