Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

NikamiJano · June 3, 2008, 3:46am

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.

*last shair posted by ...S.786

na kisi k dil ka sukon hon,na kisi k dil ka qarar hoon…,**
ju kisi k kaam na aasaky men wo aek mushk-e-ghubar hon

noon

NikamiJano · June 3, 2008, 3:51am

nahi hai taab to phiR aashiqui ki rah na chal
ye karezaaR e janoon hai, jigeR nikal ke rakh

"khey"

muddii · June 3, 2008, 4:31am

Khulta Nahee Hai Haal Kisse Purr Kahay Baghair
Purr Dil Key Jaan Leetay Hain Dilber Kahay Baghair

"Ray" Bhadarshah Zafar

S.786 · June 3, 2008, 5:02am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

ranjishen sahi dil dukhany k liye aa

aa phir sy mujhy chur k jany k liye aa

alif

redidentity · June 3, 2008, 5:15am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

Uss Gherat-e-Naheed Ki Her Taan Hai Deepak
Shola Sa Lapak Jaye Hai Awaz To Dekho

'Wow'

S.786 · June 3, 2008, 5:27am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

wo mujhko tuorr k phir juorta raha aksar

men os k wasty jesy koi khilonaa thaa.....!

alif

Shab-e-Hijar · June 3, 2008, 6:21am

Ikhlas-o-Wafa kay sajdoo'n ki jis dar pay daad nahi milti
Aye Azm-e-khudi , Aye ghairat-e-Dil , uss dar pe sajda kya karna

Alif

AQ · June 3, 2008, 6:33am

**bahut khoob :)

Udaaaaas raah koi daaastaN sunaayegi
Karo gaY yaad tau har baat yaad aayegi

"Ye"

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 3, 2008, 7:59am

Yaad uss ney kiya hey phir shaaid
Zakhm risney laga hey phir shaaid

''daal''

Shumaisa · June 3, 2008, 8:13am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

Darrya b saamne tha mukammal kataao par
aur zindagi rawaan thi muhabbat ki nao par
kaise zameen kii qaiid say koii nikall sakayy
har simtt aasmaan hai puuray jhukaao parr

Ray

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · June 3, 2008, 8:20am

Raat ke parDey mein chuhp kar khuuN rulaati chahto
iss qadar kyuun door ho, mujhsey zara ye to kaho
merey paas aa kar kabhii meri kahani bhi suno
siskiyaan leti hawaain kah raheen hein 'chup raho'

''wao''

Shumaisa · June 3, 2008, 8:24am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

Woh hairaan hain hamaray zabt pe keh do qateel unse
jo daaman pay nahin girrta woh aansoo dil pe girta hai

Yeh

S.786 · June 3, 2008, 6:02pm

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

ye parinda kanwal ummedon ka...

kitni onchi orran orrtaa hay.........?

Shab-e-Hijar · June 4, 2008, 3:48am

Ye or baat keh ,meri ana jata na saki
mujhay juno'n tera her juno'n say barh kay raha

Alif

Koyal · June 4, 2008, 4:01am

aik pal wo apNa sa laga aur be-gana kar gay'aa
na-janay keoN jatey jatey mujhay dewaNa kar gay'aa
**
**
"alif"

redidentity · June 4, 2008, 4:23am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

Abb Ke Wo Dard De Ke Main Ro'un Tamaam Umrr
Abb Ke Laga Wo Zakhm Ke Jeena Muhaal Ho

'Wow'

Koyal · June 4, 2008, 4:28am

wo kehti hai main pani par tera chehra bana'OoN gi
maiN kehta hooN mujhay lagta hai tera dil b pani hai

"ye"

redidentity · June 4, 2008, 5:32am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

Ye Bhi Shayad Zindai Ki Ek Adaa hai Dosto
Jis Ko Saathi Mil Gaya, Wo Aur Tanha Ho Gaya

'Alif'

Shab-e-Hijar · June 4, 2008, 5:32am

yehi bohat hai kay baitha hai sir jhukaiy howay
mujhay ujaar kar woh shaks sharamsaar tou hai

ye

redidentity · June 4, 2008, 5:59am

Re: Bait Bazi Month of June 2008

Ye Bhi Aadaab Hamaray Hain Tumhain Kia Maloom
Hum Tumhain Jeet Ke Haaray Hain Tumhain Kia Maloom

'Meem'