Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

NikamiJano · January 1, 2008, 12:12pm

Rules of Bait Bazi:

Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.

Starting with red’s SheR

Ye Saaniha Bhi Muhabbat Main Baar'ha Guzara Ke Uss Ne Haal Bhi Poocha To Aankh Bhar Aaii

“ye”

Sheal · January 1, 2008, 12:58pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Yay saal bhi udaas raha rooth ker gaya
** Tujh say milay baghair december guzar gaya**

** " Alif "**

deadsoul · January 1, 2008, 1:23pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

iss qadar zarf to rakhtay hain dunya walay
zindagi cheen k jeenay ki dua daitay hain

"noon"

redidentity · January 1, 2008, 6:17pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Na Dikha'ain Ge Kabhi Dil Pe Lage Zakhm Unhain
Dard Uthay Ga Magar Dil Main Daba Rakhain Ge

'Ye'

Sheal · January 1, 2008, 7:52pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

YaadoN ka aek shor tha rastoN meiN har taraf
** hum aek pal bhi dasht mein tanha nahi huwey

" Yay "

by, Amal
**

Dushwari · January 1, 2008, 8:39pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

yeye aik neye waket ka peyaam heye
taveel seb mukhtasir hoon mushkilein saaree
mausamoon aur lemhoon meye itni anayet ho
keye herr galatee ka ulet ker paein
keye herr gunha ko beksh paein
keye herr aik na kaami ko baedl dalein kamyabiyoon meye
herr aik beye-ja natalukee ko aziz taluk bhena lein
umr keye herr iseye meye
kushmizajee paein
apneye gher meye, apneye zehan meye kushadgee paein
aik niya sal heye aya,
iss ko sal-e-kushee paein
iss ko sal-e-humee (determined based on right and wrong) bhenaein
iss seye apni zindagiyoon meye kushe paein
koe bhee ghem aeye tow iss ko sabr seye, semjh seye
apneye aap meye jazb ker lein
iss keye bawajood, himet seye apneye aap ko
aur dosaroon ko aur ba-himet ker lein
neye sal ko galeye mill ker kushamdeed kahein
aur neye sal ko apna sal bhena lein :>

sorry if it is free verse.
the ending is 'lein'

redidentity · January 2, 2008, 10:21am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Nashay Se Kam To Nahi Yaad-e-Yaar Ka Aalam
Ke Le Uraa Hai Koi Dosh Per Hawa Ke Mujhe

'Ye'

Berhi_Bee · January 2, 2008, 6:50pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Ya Rub woh kon hai jis nay paa liya tumhein,
humein to mushkil ho gaya ik insaan ka milna.....

"Alif"

Dushwari · January 3, 2008, 3:50am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

ana tum bhee ana milneye, seb apni teizee jheile ker
meh-ansoon pee ker phir meye bhee chel doon gee

'e'

sunny_nicky · January 3, 2008, 11:37am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

ek bas tuu hi nahi mujhase Khafaa ho baiThaa
main ne jo sang taraashaa vo Khuda ho baiTha

deadsoul · January 3, 2008, 12:01pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

in barishon say dosti achi nahi faraz
kaccha tera makan hai kuch to khayal kar

"ray"

sunny_nicky · January 3, 2008, 12:13pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

raaz-e-ulfat chhupaa ke dekh liyaa
dil bahot kuchh jalaa ke dekh liyaa

redidentity · January 3, 2008, 3:27pm

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Itna Naazuk Ayena Rakhna Zaruri To Nahi
Toot'ta Hai Dil To Dil Badal Ker Dekh Lo

'Wow'

Koyal · January 5, 2008, 3:15am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

wo qaiyamat ho sitara ho k dil
kuch na kuch hijer meiN totay to sahi

hum waheeN par hi basa lein khud ko
wo kabhi rah mein rokay to sahi

"ye"

redidentity · January 5, 2008, 4:21am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Yuun Aur Bhi Haseen Ho Jaye
Wo Ger Udaas Ho Bethay

'Ye'

Dushwari · January 5, 2008, 4:42am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

bhooj seko tow...yeye raaz heye khula huva
jo khul na payeye, yeye raaz heye wohh!

'wohh'

redidentity · January 5, 2008, 4:54am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Wo To Wo Hai tumhain Ho Jaye Gi Ulfat Hum Se
Ek Nazar Tum Mera Mehboob-e-Nazar To Dekho

'Wow'

Dushwari · January 5, 2008, 5:18am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

wohh guzree bohet na-gavar lau kee sheb
iss ka endheira goya roshen-khiyal ker chela

la

redidentity · January 5, 2008, 5:26am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

Isi Andaaz Main Hotay Thay Mukhatib Mujh Se
Khat Kisi Aur Ko Likho Ge To Yaad Aon Ga

'Alif'

Dushwari · January 5, 2008, 5:31am

Re: Bait Bazi ..month of Jan..2008

izzet kee soojh aur baraber ka na ho jiseye lau kee paas dari ka hunr
jo na rekheye iss wafa ko nezdeek ter, tow aisa apna bhee kiya ho ga?

a