Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Rules of Bait Bazi:

  1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.

  2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

  3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

  4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).

  5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

  6. Avoid posting film songs.

Starting with Shumaisa’s SheR

Aankh samandarr lub sehra aurr chehre pe hoo ka aa'lam raaz chupanay ki koshish main tum charcha kar bethay ho

wow

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

khirki per destekh si jegee
sana'taa kutch bol raha heye

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Wo Chaand Ban Ke Meray Jism Main Pighalta Raha Lahuu Main Hoti Gai ROshni Ki Aamezish 'Sheen'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008


safaR ki had hai vahaaN tak k kuch nishaa'N rahe
chale chalo ke jahaa.N tak ye aasmaa'N rahe

"ye"

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Ye He Taskeen Ki Surat Hai To Phir
Chaar Din Gham Ko Bhi Apna Dekho

'Wow'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

wo jo geet tum nay suna nahin, merii umrr bhar ka riyaz tha
maire dard ki thii wo dastaan, jisse tum hansi main ura gaye
mairii umrr say na simat sakay maire pass jitnay sawal thay
tairay pass jitnay jawab they, tairii ikk nigaah main aa gaye

Yeh

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Yuun Aur Bhi Haseen Ho Jaye
Wo Ger Udaas Ho Bethay

'Ye'

(Ahmer)

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Yarub mujhe wo Quwat-e-bardasht de k main
in barishoon mein reit kii deewar ho na jaoon

Noon

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Na Mila Per Na Mila, Ishq Ko Andaaz-e-Junoon
Hum Ne Majnoon Ki Bhi Aashufta'Sari Dekhi Hai

'Ye'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Yeh Na Ho Keh Shehar Mein Tanhai Ke Mujrim Thehro
Dil Milein Ya Na Milein, Haath Milaatey Rehna..

"Alif"

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Ek Ishq Ka Gham Aafat, Aur Uss Pe Ye Dil Aafat
Ya Gham Na Dia Hota, Ya Dil Na Dia Hota

'Alif'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

in barishon sy dosti achi nahi faraz
kacha tera makaan hai kuch to khyal kar

"ray"

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Rotay Hain Dil Ke Zakhm To Hansta Nahi Koi
Itna To Faida Mujhe Tanha'ion Se Hai

'Ye'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

yeh masla ab ahl e mohabbat ka hai apna
martay hain to kuch ap pay ehsaan nahi kartay

"yey"

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Ye Aana Koi Aana Hai Ke Bus Rasmann Chalay Aye
Ye Milna Khaak Milna Ke Dil Se Dil Nahin Milta

'Alif'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

iss qadar zarf to rakhtay hain dunya walay
zindagi cheen k jeenay ki dua detay hain

"noon

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Na Fana Meri Na Baqa Meri Mujhe Ay Shakeel Na Dhoondeay
Main Kisi Ka Husn-e-Khayaal Hoon, Mera Kuch Wujood Adam Nahin

'Noon'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

na janay kaun say jazbon ki yon taskeen karta hon
bazahir to tumharay khat jala kar kuch nahi milta

"alif"

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

Abb Teri Zarurat Bhi Buhat Kam Hai Meri Jaan
Abb Shauq Ka Kuch Aur He Aalam Hai Meri Jaan

'Noon'

Re: Bait Bazi...Month of Feb...2008

na samjho isay shor e baharan
khizan paton me chup k ro rahi hai
hamray ghar ki dewaron pay nasir
udasi baal kholay so rahi hai

"yey"