Bait Bazi - March | NEW RULE

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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NEW RULE****

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[note]NEW RULE: Aap sheir ke aakhiri lafz ke pehley harf ya aakhiri harf, donoN meiN sey kisi ko bhi apney reply ke leeye istimaal kar saktey heiN.

This thread will be unlocked shortly once members take note of the new rule.
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Azizaan-e-man :salam:

Bait Bazi ka March Edition aek naey rule ke saath shuru kia ja raha hey ta ke aap ko sheir ka reply karne meiN sahoolat ho. Jesa ke kuch members ney suggest bhi kia tha, lehaaza is editon meiN aap sheir ke aakhiri lafz ke pehley harf ya aakhiri harf, donoN meiN sey kisi ko bhi apney reply ke leeye istimaal kar saktey heiN. Baqi rules wohi raheiN ge jo ke mundarja-zeil heiN:

  1. Shair should be genuine and not your own.
    — > Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.

  2. Dont break the chain and always follow either the first or the last letter of the last posted shair.

  3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

  4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).

  5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

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Re: Bait Bazi - NEW RULE

Yaadon ka aik shor tha raston mein har taraf
hum aik pal bhi dasht mein tanha nahi huay

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*YuN hi nahiN mashoor-e-zamaana mera qaatil
is shakhs ko is fun meiN maharaat bhi bohaat thi *

"tey or ye"**

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yeh bhi hoga wo mujhe dil se bhula de ga magar
yeh bhi hoga khud ussi mein ik khala reh jaey ga

"gaaf or alif"

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Re: Bait Bazi - NEW RULE

Gai rutoN ka payaam ley kar, kahaN sey aaya kahaN gaya wo
ajeeb maanoos ajnabi tha, mujhey to heiraan kar gaya wo
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**Wao or hey

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Re: Bait Bazi - March | NEW RULE

waqt ne wo khaak uraa_ii hai ke, dil ke dasht se
qaffile guzre hain phir bhi naqsh-e-paa koi nahin

"noon "

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*NigaheiN bolti heiN be'tahaasha
mohabbat paagloN ki guftagu hey *

Hey aur ye

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**Hadse dono yeh alam maiN eham guzrey heiN
meraa marna, teri zaulf ka pareshan honaa

**

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Aaj ke daor meiN aye dost ye manzar kyoN hey
zakhm har sar pe aur haath meiN patthar kyoN hey

Hey aur ye

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**Humein kitney bhi shikway hon uss ki jafaaon kay
Per uss kay saamnay har ik shikayat haar jati hay
Ik aarzoo si hay keh uss ko bhool jayen hum
Per uss ki yaad aatey he ye hasrat haar jati hay

Hey/ Yay**

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hum iss ko kiya tarashain pather sey
wo khud hai sung-e-marmar ka bana huwa

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Andaaz hu-bahu teri aawaaz-e-paa ka tha
deikha nikal ke ghar sey to johNka hawa ka tha
**
**Tey or Alif

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*Tu kiya yeh tay hay kay abb umar bhar nahi milna
Tu phir yeh umar bhee kyun tum gar nahi milna
*
'Meem' or 'Alif'

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Main hans kay jheel leta hooN judaai ki sabhi rasmaiN
Galay jab us kay lagta hoon to ankhaiN bheeg jati haiN

"Hay **or **Noon"

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Na jaane ashq se aaNkhoN maiN kyoN heiN aaye huwey
guzar gayaa zamaanaa tujhe bhulaaye huwey

Hey aur Ye

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*
Yeh faqat guroor ki baat hai ke zubaan se apni na tum kaho
Tumhein warna is ki khalish tau hai ke tumhari bazm mein hum nahe ...*

Next: "Noon / Yeh"

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**Na janay kub bichar jayegah mujhsay
Woh meri zindagi hotay huway bhee...

'bay' or 'ye'
**

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**bahar ayee to jaisey ek baar
laut aaye hain phir adam se
woh khvaab saare, shabaab saare
joh tere honthon pe mar mite thay

Faiz Ahmed Faiz

"tay" or "ye"
**

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Re: Bait Bazi - March | NEW RULE

*Tu kiya yeh tay hay kay abb umar bhar nahi milna
Tu phir yeh umar bhee kyun? tumsay gar nahi milna...
*
'Meem' or 'Alif'

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Re: Bait Bazi - March | NEW RULE

Is dil ko kisi aahat ki aas rehti hai
Nigaah ko kisi surat ki pyaas rehti hai
Us ke bina kisi cheez ki kami tau nahe
Magar us ke bina zindagi udaas rehti hai ...

Next: "Hay / Ye"