Bait Bazi -June 2014

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

koi umeed bar nahi aati,
koi surat nazar nahi aati,
maut ka eik din mueen hai,
neend kyun raat bhar nahi aati (ghalib)

Alif/ye

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

ab kaun baat rah gaii ye baat bhii gaii
**yaani kabhii kabhii kii mulaaqaat bhii gaii

gaaf/ye**

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

***GuloN pe likhtee huwee La Ilaha IlAllaah*
PahaaRiyoN se wo utree azaaN ki Khushbu**

Khay/Vow****

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

وہ دلنواز لمحے بھی گئی رُتوں میں آئے۔ جب...

میں خواب دیکھتی رہی، وہ مجھ کو دیکھتا رہا

Re / alif

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

:(
Isi ishq sey, isi chah sey, isi pyaar sey, isi maan sey
meray haath mey ik gulaab do mey bohat dino se udaas hooN

hey

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

hai tere kaan zulf-e-muimbar lagii huii
**rakkhegii ye na baal baraabar lagii huii

hey/ye**

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

Yahi Ijaz hay awargi ka
Jahan bhi gaiay dastaaN chor aay

alif/yay

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

اے سمندر کی ہوا تیرا کرم بھی معلوم...
پیاس ساحل کی تو بجھتی نہیں سیلاب سے بھی ―

احمد فراز

be/ye

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

yah dil yah pagal dil maira keon bujh gia awargi
iss dasht main ek shahr tha, woh kia howa awargi

alif/yay

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

Ashk ban kar meri chashm-e-tar mein rehta hay
Ajeeg shakhs hay, pani ke ghar mein rehta hay...

hay/yay

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

ye aur baat terii galii mein na aayen hum
**lekin ye kyaa ki shahar teraa chhor jaayen hum

hey/meem**

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

yaad kisii kii chaa. Ndanii ban kar koThe koThe utarii hai
yaad kisii kii dhuup hu_ii hai ziinaa ziinaa utarii hai

hay/yah

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

ye kon log andheron ki bat karty hyn
abhi to chaand teri yad k dhaly bhi nahin

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

:crying:

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

aap shair likhna bhool gaye :crying:

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

ap lafz likhna bhool gaye hain hazrat, kia noon hay, ya yeh hay?

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

noon se....
Na tum aao, na neend aye, na maut aye , na din niklay
shab-e-waada kisi sorat se akhir chain aye bhi....

seen/tay

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

how is seen/tay

it should be** bay/yeh**

Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

hey/noon


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Re: Bait Bazi -June 2014

Na thi aur koi bhi ranjishain,
sirf adaton mai tazad tha,
ke usay pasand thi shokhian,
mujhay sadgi mai kamal tha

tay/alif