Bait Bazi - June 2013

Aceones · June 21, 2013, 9:20pm

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mai chup raha tou aur bhi ghlat fehmiyan barheeN
woh bhi suna hai us nay jo mai nay kaha naheeN

P_G · June 21, 2013, 9:38pm

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Nerangiye siyasat-e- doraan to dekhiye
manzil ussay mili jo shareek-e- safar na thay

Aceones · June 21, 2013, 9:42pm

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ye jo gard hay meray jism par, kaee manziloon ki naveed hay
ye aTa huwa, ye phaTa huwa, jo libaas hay, mujhay raas hay

P_G · June 21, 2013, 9:53pm

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yeh kya tilasm hai yaaroo ke har safar ke liye
main roz aik hi darya ko paar karta hoon

Aceones · June 21, 2013, 9:57pm

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naee talaash, naye raaston kay baray main
kisi bhaTaktay huway kaarwaaN say poochoonga

tarash · June 22, 2013, 5:06pm

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Aik din woh mil gaye they sar-e-rahguzar kahin,
Phir dil ne bethne na diya umar bhar kahin..

kaaf/noon

LP · June 22, 2013, 5:42pm

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Na sho’le meiN yeh karishma na barq meiN ye ada
koee bataao K woh shoKH-e-tund_KHoo kya hai ?

tarash · June 22, 2013, 5:52pm

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*Ye hayaat-e-mukhtasir hi kaatni dushwaar hai
Kia karu’n ga lay k umer-e-jawida’n tere baghair. *

bay/ray

cutenice62 · June 25, 2013, 7:12am

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Rang-e-mehfil dekhney ko hosh mein aye thay hum..
Hosh phir urney lagey hein rang-e-mehfil dekh ker!

Diva · June 25, 2013, 3:37pm

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Rooh Mein Koi Gham Hai Posheeda...
Zindagi Be-Sabab Udass Nahi.....!!!!

tarash · June 25, 2013, 5:27pm

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Nadeem tark-e-mohabbat ko aik umer hui.
Main ab bhi soch raha hun key bhool jaon usay

alif/yeh

LP · June 26, 2013, 6:21pm

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ye alag baat hai kay taa'ruf na ho saka warna

ham zindagi kay saath bohat door tak chalay

tarash · June 26, 2013, 6:26pm

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Yeh jesay log hain wesay nazaar nahi atey,
Rafaqtun main chupi hain adawatain kya kya

kaaf/alif

clad · June 27, 2013, 1:42am

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you dont even know the meaning of that sher , You know !! We need a some restrictions like you cant post a sher jis ka matlab u ko khud nae aata ho

Akele To Hum Pehle Bhi Jee Rahe The
Kyu Tanha Se Ho Gaye Hai Tere Jane Ke Baad

DAL

LP · June 27, 2013, 1:48am

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Samjhane ka shauq hai tou samjha diya karain :D

Its bey se ya daal se

Bhool Jana Bhi Usay Yaad bhi Kartay Rehna,

Acha Lagta Hai Isi Dhun Mein Bikhartay Rehna,

Diva · June 27, 2013, 4:24pm

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Aaye tu yun ke jaisay hamesha thay meharbaan
Bhoolay tu yun ke goya kabhi aashna na thay

tarash · June 27, 2013, 5:24pm

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Terey nazdeek reh kar bhi ye doori ka gumaan kesa,
Teri bahien meri khatir kushada kiyon nahi hotien,

heh/noon

clad · June 28, 2013, 12:14am

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U r the MOD of Poetry forum ..… yar Khuda ko mano koi or section lay lo PLZ …
and Sorry MR/MS DIVA, I looked at this cat of urz for like 2 mints without blinkin , I have a very strong urge to hit it with a baseball bat

LP · June 28, 2013, 12:18am

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Yahan bait bazi kijiye

Hum ke ruuthi huwi rutt ko bhi manaa letay thay…

Hum ne dekha hi na thaa mausam-e-hijraan janaan…

Jeem/noon

clad · June 28, 2013, 12:28am

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OK MISS LP

Jab chali apnon ki gardan par chali
chuum lun hont taire talwaar kay

YAYY . Y