Bait Bazi (January 2015)

Aceones · January 13, 2015, 5:19am

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ho na duniya main koi hum sa bhi pyasa logo
ji main aati hay k pee jain ye dariya logo

P_G · January 13, 2015, 7:40am

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wohe shaam -e-sabr ruke hoyee,wohee fizza main sakoot hai

wohee bay sabab se hai zindgee , na jawaz hai ,na saboot hai !

Aceones · January 13, 2015, 7:42am

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hasratoon kay Qissay paak hongay
janay hum kab rizQ-e-Khaak hongay

P_G · January 13, 2015, 7:55am

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Har shakhs main tazaad hai

Din Rat ki terah

Aceones · January 13, 2015, 7:59am

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titli ki hay bhool
sheesha toR kay choomay gi
paper weight kay phool!

P_G · January 13, 2015, 8:36am

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Pathar mujhay kehta hai ,mera chahnay wala . . . . . . . . Main moom hun,us nay mujhay chu kar nahi daikha . . . . .

Aceones · January 13, 2015, 9:42am

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Doobtay waqt zard tha itna
log samjhay k mar gaya sooraj

P_G · January 13, 2015, 10:44am

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Saddion bad mila bhi to,mere lub par koi gilla na tha. ... . . . . . .mere chup nay usay rula dia,jisay guftgu main kamaal tha!

Aceones · January 13, 2015, 12:33pm

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tanha samajh raha hay meray dil Ko charagar
duniya basi hay is main, kisi k khyaal ki

P_G · January 13, 2015, 3:10pm

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Kon jeeta hai tere zulf k sir honay tak................khaak ho jain gai tujh ko khabar honay tak ..

muqawwee123 · January 13, 2015, 3:15pm

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cheating

iss ghazal ka koi bhi shair ‘kaaf’ se shroo nahin hota… ik ghair maroof shair ‘ye’ se zaroor shroo hota hai

P_G · January 13, 2015, 3:41pm

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Main to aj tak ise tarah yeh shair gunganate rahe ... .kia hai phir sahe version?

muqawwee123 · January 13, 2015, 3:45pm

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P_G · January 13, 2015, 3:52pm

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Ha ha ha. .kia khichre bana de mainay toba toba.. . .

muqawwee123 · January 13, 2015, 3:57pm

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koi baat nahin. koi aur shair suna kar silsila aage baRhaiye

Aceones · January 13, 2015, 5:02pm

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wesay aapnay correct shair "mana kay taghaful..." is hi thread main ya "lafz-ba-lafz poetry" walay thread main last week post kiya tha, khichRi shaid damm par thi, aaj hi tayyar hui hay

P_G · January 14, 2015, 7:44am

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shuker yeh k kal ik majlis mai is shair k baray main koi pooch raha tha ..mainy bataaya nahi ..werna sahee ki baistee hotee

kahan aa k ruknay thay raastay ,kahan morr tha ussay bhool ja

jo mil gaya ussay yaad rakh ,jo na milla usay bhool ja !

Aceones · January 14, 2015, 9:07am

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main logon se mulaqaton ke
lamhy yaad rakhta hoon
main baatain bhool bhi jaon
to lehjy yaad rakhta hoon

P_G · January 14, 2015, 11:14am

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Har waqt ka hansna tujhay barbaad na kar day. . . . . . .tanhaaye main baith kar kabhi ro bhi lia kar

Aceones · January 14, 2015, 11:53am

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kisi aur Gham main itni Khalish nehaaN nahiN hay
Gham-e-dil meray rafeeQo, Gham-e-raaegaaN nahi hay