Bait Bazi-II 2006

Wahab_Gujjar · July 26, 2006, 3:21am

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yuu.N chup rahanaa Thiik nahii.n ko_ii miiThii baat karo
mor chakor papihaa koyal sab ko maat karo ****
*saavan to man bagiyaa se bin barase biit gayaa
ras me.n Duube naGme kii ab tum barasaat karo *

'wow'

goodnews · July 26, 2006, 5:13am

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***Wafaa ke Khvaab muhabbat kaa aasara le jaa
agar chalaa hai to jo kuchh mujhe diyaa le jaa
*****yahii hai qismaty saharaa yahii karam teraa
ki buu.Nd buu.Nd ataa kar ghaTaa ghaTaa le jaa

**Alif
:peshow:

Bholay_Bisray · July 26, 2006, 8:08am

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goodnews better not to quote previous message every time! though just a suggestion .

Bholay_Bisray · July 26, 2006, 8:19am

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apanaa a.njaam to maaluum hai sab ko phir bhii
apanii nazaro.n me.n har insaan sika.ndar kyuu.N hai
zindagii jiine ke qaabil hii nahii.n ab "Faakir"
varnaa har aa.Nkh me.n ashko.n kaa sama.ndar kyuu.N hai

"Ye"

Wahab_Gujjar · July 26, 2006, 9:36am

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Yar goodnews app kion ik badnews ki tarha mayre pichay hi par gay ho
lo yar tha say shayer

**Thahar jaao ke hairaanii to jaaye
tumhaarii shakl pahachaanii to jaaye

shab-e-Gam tuu hii mahamaa.N ban ke aajaa
hamaare ghar kii viraanii to jaaye
**

goodnews · July 26, 2006, 10:21am

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Bhai Anjan Whab Gujjar sahab,
Ap main na manon wali bat kr rhy hu , Arabic main yeh harf nahi hy magar Udrud Keep in mind Lashkri zban hy. btao lafz “Khana” kia Kaf sy hota hy Kaf or h sy mil kr kh bna “Jeem” jhola" nahi khty "jhy" Jhola hota hy.jysa hmary Asateza (Ustad ki jma) ny btya.Horofy Tahji main hi hy asani k liy urdu k am qaidon main yeh nahi hota tha magar ab Bhy, thy, thy(like:2guns: )chy(Chu kr mry man ko…{song yad ho ga}[choha(rat)] alag cheez hy chu kr mry man sy) jhy,khy, ghy(ghar)Misalin hain.
Woh apni khu na chrin gy ham apni wzha kion badlin
Subak ser ban k woh pochin k ham sy srgiran kion ho:confused:

goodnews · July 26, 2006, 10:22am

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Mushkil hy bhai ju hal tumhara hy k tumhary ghar(dil) ki viranni jay hahahahaha{take it easy}
Afsos k yeh thy sy nahi Tha:2guns: sy hy (totly ho tu sorry) magar haqiqat yeh hy k Ty hoti hy jis By typ thing pr do nuqty hon what you wrote yeh woh hy jis pr nuqty nahi “toin” hoti hy yeh hy sy mil kr thehr jao ,tha kr diya thok di gari, lafaz banty hain. jysa k thori dyr alag talafuz hy is lafaz ka.Tumhary pichy parny wali bat nahi hy,Main Urdu ki mhubat main mubtla hon bro.

goodnews · July 26, 2006, 10:27am

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Bholay Bisray yeh btao jab Quote pr click krty hain tu previous message tu lamuhala jata hy, wasy bhi koi hraj nahi do dfa shyr prhny sy yad ho jay ga kia hraj hy wasy “ye” sy shyr hy

Yon tu Said bhi ho Mirza bhi ho Afghan bhi hu
**Tum Sabhi kuch ho btao tu Muslman bhi ho:confused: **
(Iqbal)
:peshow: “wow”

Amal · July 26, 2006, 11:54am

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**
Woh to sadiyooN ka safar kar key yahaaN pohaNcha tha
tu nay mooN pheir kar jis shakhs ko deikha bhi nahee

"Ye"

**

Dr_Sufi · July 26, 2006, 1:42pm

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What is the rule regarding NOON GHUNA? Is it considered as NOON or the letter preceding it, is taken into account? Please guide me. Till then, here is one with Ye and the other with Noon.

Ye

yoonhi aksar beThay beThay gum ho jata hoon
ab mein aksar mein naheen rahta tum ho jata hoon

noon

naz ne dikhlay jab nazneen ko apnay naz
nazneen bhi naz kay nazon pay nazan ho gai

Wahab_Gujjar · July 26, 2006, 3:08pm

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*ye shiishe ye sapne ye rishte ye dhaage
kise kyaa Khabar hai kahaa.N TuuT jaaye.N
muhabbat ke dariyaa me.n tinake vafaa ke
na jaane ye kis mo.D par Duub jaaye.N
*

*'Noon'
*

Bholay_Bisray · July 26, 2006, 4:29pm

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i guess here we should just write shair , no comments or quotes , may be others have different choice. If i will be MOD, i could have given you and others a “warning” . sorry but thats how this Bait Bazi thread will looks nice. we have other threads/posts, there you can quote and discuss or answer to others, but here , i guess just writting a shair is a good idea. Think it over!

Bholay_Bisray · July 26, 2006, 4:40pm

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naqsh-e-Khayaal dil se miTaayaa nahii.n hanoz
bedard mai.n ne tujhako bhulaayaa nahii.n hanoz
vo sar jo terii raahaguzar me.n thaa sajdaa-rez
mai.n ne kisii qadam pe jhukaayaa nahii.n hanoz

"Zay" OR ?

PS : hanoz=still

sad_affect · July 26, 2006, 5:04pm

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Zara un ki shokhi tou dakhiye liye zulf-e-khum shuda haath main
mere peechay aaye dabe dabe mujhe saanp keh ker dara diya

NikamiJano · July 26, 2006, 8:07pm

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i guess BB is right goodnews here u only can post sher not your comments..

Amal · July 26, 2006, 11:47pm

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If comment it related to a sheir, than it should be allowed. Lekin itna time hi kahaN hota hey kisi ke paas. Majaal hey koi mooN sey aek lafz phootey kisi achey sheir ke leey :(

**
Aahat thi kisi khaab ki ya dhoka tha nazar ka
ik pal meiN sakoot toot gaya dil ki qabar ka
aaNkhoN ka sehan bheeg gaya yaadoN ki nami sey
kuch bhi to sila nahi mila ashqoN pe jabar ka

"Alif"
**

NikamiJano · July 27, 2006, 1:55am

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ji sirf tareef ki jaiey tu theek hai Aymal aur agar raam kahani sunaiey jaiey tu is k barey main kia khayal hia ap ka:halo: ..wesay ye tareef ap shoro kar daitey tu acha tha:halo:

NikamiJano · July 27, 2006, 1:57am

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ab keoN dhoondhooN wo chashm-e-karam honay day sitam bala-e-sitam
maiN chahta hooN a'ey jazba-e-gham mushkal pe se mushkil aa'jaaey

"ye"

darwesh · July 27, 2006, 2:23am

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N-J, Saheba...Cheers,
Apke Sher Ki Tareef Ki Neeyat Ki...Magar, doosre Misre main:
" MUSHKAL PE SE MUSHKIL AAJAYE " samajhne se qasir hun...
Aey Gham e Dil Kiya Karoon ?

Yeh Kaun Zer E Zamin Isko GudGudata Hai
** Ke Muskurati Hui Har Kali Nikalti Hai........ !**

darwesh

goodnews · July 27, 2006, 2:34am

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Yeh Dastory zban bandi hy kysa teri mehfil main
Yhan tu bat krny ko trsti hy zban meri (Allama Iqbal)
:peshow: (y)