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Azad~ raat bohut ho gaii hay
Kissi ki yaad ke serhane so ja
Zindagi ki sham janay kab ho
Essi faryaad ke ba'hanay so ja
Adab Arz
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adal ki umeed bhala kis se karein ab!
munsif hi bann jaain agar qatil Dosto!
**nikal do in butoon ko aiwan-o haram se
abd-o mabud mein kiyun ho koi Haail Dosto! **
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Wo khayal tha koi dhanak-numa ya koi aks tha merey ru'baru
jo mujhey har taraf sey tu laga wo tu hi tha ya koi hu-bahu!
bayaaN meiN thi wo chaashni ke mehak raha tha harf harf
jesey khushbuoN ki zubaan meiN koi kar raha ho guftagu**
Next: "wao"
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bohut khoob
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Bohut Khoob.
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waqt hee jab guzar jata hai
waqt hee jab guzar jata hai
tu atee hai insane ko qadar us kee
ab kia raha jata hai
jab waqt hee guzar jata hai
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next word hay
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Next is "ye" not "hay"
ye taqdeer ki heiN chaaleiN ke badli hui hey baazi
jo mera chaara'gar hey meiN usi ka hooN nishaana
abhi tamheed hi suni thi ke bilak ke ro parra wo
jo meiN kehney ja raha tha wo tha asal fasaana
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Ho dil mein soz, to alfaz bhi teer haiN
"saaqi kay beghair warna kya hai maikhana"
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Aaj mey baantney nikley ho to khayaal rahey
hamaari aas ka sookha huwa hey peymaana
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hummm
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Sigh
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**Aap he jald jaan jaoo gay..
Derd ki lo ko phir bujha rakhna
Waisay milna tu ab naseeb nahi
Zard shamoon mein rabtay rakhna…
Next one is ‘Alif’
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Aana parr jaey shaed waapis kabhi
khuley waapsi ke raastey rakhna
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Next: Alif
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ab to saal itney beet gaye haiN, anjaan rahooN meiN
raastay mil bhi gaey to meezbaaN shayed ho bayghaana
Next:** Alef**
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Aaaj ki sham main ajub rung bheray hein
guzri huwiee yadoon kay pehray say lagay hein..
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Very nice Fara :k:..but I would have written the first line a bit differently for the sake of balance:
Aaaj ki sham main kitney ajab rung bheray hein
guzri huwiee yadoon kay pehray say lagay hein…
Mine with “noon”
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NeendoN ki waadiyoN meiN aaj taaroN ka milan hey
aaNkhoN ke jharoNkey jesey khaaboN sey ladey heiN
Noon** again
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**Nazuk say yeh rishtay hein inhein aisay na toro
In rastoon pay hum tum bari door chalay hein...
Noon
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Na janey kab samjho gey tum mud’da’a dil ka
umeedoN ke ye chiraagh to muddat sey jaley heiN
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Next: Noon
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*Nazroon ki tu baat nahi hay, Wu tu dil mein bustay hein... ...
Unko bhee maloom nahi hay manzur kub kub khiltay hein... ...
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