Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition
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Yun raat chal gai koi chaal ke hum deikhtey rahey
hamarey khaab hamarey waastey wa’baal ho gaey
Next: “ye”
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do lines likhna itna aasaan shaed na ho, lekin itna mushkil bhi nahi hey jitna aap log banaa rahey heiN. It hardly took me 20 seconds to write the above sheir. Aur deikhye ke Bookworm ke sheir sey qaafya bhi milaya hey meiN ney. Aap ka masla ye hey ke aap aur baaqi kuch dost koshish karney ko taiyaar nahi heiN 
Deikhye is Bait Bazi ke zarye hum log aek doosrey ki islaah bhi to kar saktey heiN. Seekh saktey heiN aek doosrey sey. Lekin jab tak hameiN pata hi nahi chaley ga ke aap ney ya meiN ney likha kya hey, hum apni ya doosroN ki islaah kar hi kesey saktey hein.
P.S.: A general note, aap sab dostoN sey guzaarish hey ke agar kisi aur ke sheir meiN aap ko islaah ka pehlu nazar aata hey to dostaana mashwara zaroor dijeeye. Creativity demands encouragment! Achi creation ki taareef na karna merey nazdeek bohat hi ghalat baat hey. Abhi tak is thread meiN ye kaam sirf GS hi ney kia hey. Please take some time to read what has been posted earlier and spend some words of praise - they won’t cost you anything but would be of utmost value to others.