Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition
Very nice Fara :k:..but I would have written the first line a bit differently for the sake of balance:
Aaaj ki sham main kitney ajab rung bheray hein
guzri huwiee yadoon kay pehray say lagay hein…
Mine with “noon”
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NeendoN ki waadiyoN meiN aaj taaroN ka milan hey
aaNkhoN ke jharoNkey jesey khaaboN sey ladey heiN
Noon** again