Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Thanx Amjad bhai :flower1:

Gul, ye kisi ghazal ke aashaar nahi heiN, Ye sey kuch likhna tha so likh dia, usi tarha jesey aap likhti ho, 2 sec meiN :slight_smile: Ya usi tarha jesey ab Noon sey likhna hey agla sheir:

Nigaah ney jhuk to jaana hey magar us sey zara pehley
hameiN itna bataa dena hamaarey saath to aao ge!
barri chahat sey aaNkhoN meiN tumharey naam ke sapney
sajaa ke rakheiN ge har shab, tum kisi raat to aao ge
“Ye”

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Acha sirf yehi she’r they , and i thought :frowning: Next sher bhi buhat acha hay :slight_smile:
Aap 2 sec pe itnay achey sher likh letey wow poori ghazal likhnay mein tou bilkul time ahi lagta hoga :k: yehi tou Fraq hay shaair hazrat aur hum logon mein:D

Phir sey ‘‘Ye’’ :halo:

Ye sab tou apnay sapnay hein sapno mein khoi hoon mein
wuh apna hay ya be-gaana kis ka sapnaa hui hoon meiN

Noon’’

PS: baqi sab log kahan hain :bummer:

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Gul hamaarey aashaar bhi utney hi achey heiN jitney ke baaqi sab logoN ke. Absolutely nothing more than that :~)

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Na-samajh hey ye dil ab kon is ko samjhaaey
jo likha taqdeer meiN hey kon usko jhutlaaey
bat ke reh gai heiN soch ki jaageereiN kiuNke
na usey saath meiN rakha na door kar paaey
"Ye" :(

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Baqi log chuttiyoN par heiN shaed :)

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Acha ji jaesy aap kahaiN:halo:

Yaadon ki iss bheeR mein neendeiN bhi ab tou khoh gaiiN
lekin wuh mil jaaey mujh ko tum bass yehii duaa karo

Wao’’

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Wo baat jo tu ney kahi nahi, wo baat jo meiN ney suni nahi
usi baat meiN hey daastaaN, usi ko tarseiN heiN samaa'ateiN

"Noon"
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Beautiful Aymal ..wesay pata tha k sab kuch akhRi he hai :bummer: :slight_smile:

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ap kesay sun saktey G ....ap k pass tame he nahi honda....wesay tame tame ki baat hia...hai na Aymal :)
aik aur beautiful sher..:)

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Naqsh ab tak maray dil par hain woh khawb tamaam
Woh jinhain tum kaee sadiyon se bhulaa baithay ho
Woh tau baadal ki tarha ghoomta hai basti basti
Tum kisay dil k sanghaasan pe sajaa baithay ho

By: Sahaab

"Wa'o"

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v nice Gul-e- Tea pata nahi tha ap b sha’eree karti nice to know :slight_smile:

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NikamiJi post**#198** deikhni chahiye tha aap ko, ultey seedhey sheir aap ko pasand aatey heiN jo parrhney waaley heiN unki baari hi nahi aai :frowning: Tame tame ki baat hey jo ke aap ke paas bilkul nahi raha :bummer:

Shahaab bohat hi umda :k:

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parha tha na Aymal lakin is ki tareef aik baar ho chuki thei na soocha baaR baaR karnay se kahiN ap :p....it's Really beauty:)

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ager issko aap shaairi kehti hain tou Allah maaf karey, me just time passing:hehe: shaairi tou Amal kartey:D

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me tu bus himat ki daad day rehi k ap kesay Aymal …pe pura uter rehi :stuck_out_tongue:

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Bohot shukria Amal. Aap ne pasand kiya tau iss ka matlab hai k waqaee bura nahin tha she’r. Lakin, Shahaab nahin, Sahaab :slight_smile:

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yeh tou he know better, well i think after reading my shers wuh zaroor kuch hazam karnay kay liye med khatey hongay :hehe: :stuck_out_tongue: