Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II

[Amal]

Re: Bait Bazi — Personal Edition II

@Asif2000

Amal,

Funny, you are saying that. I bet you haven’t been reading or paying attention to our (Zamil’s and mine) qat’aat back to back using my “zameen”. But then again, this is not the first time I have been under rated. Agar aap humare asha’r per gaur farmate to yeh yaqeenan na kehtay.

Riyaayat-e-laffazee kay gaurakh dhande sabhee jante haiN magar ma’anee bharay sha’er kehnaa ba’az logoN ke ikhtyar maiN hee hota hay.

When you used my zameen, I didn’t feel violated because just by using the last similar word, you don’t really use the zameen, you have to also use the same rythm and tempo which apparantly was missing in your version of my zameen so I have to say that you didn’t do “Insaaf” with my zameen.

Having said that, please let me use your zameen now, if you don’t mind, starting with “Noon.”

NaheeN dushmanoN ko khabar huee maire Saai’baN abhee aur haiN
maire qatiloN ko naheeN pata meire meherbaaN abhee aur haiN

unheeN raastoN pe puhaNch gaye, jahaN ibtidaa-e-safar huaa
humaiN manziloN ka gumaan thaa jahaaN karwaaN abhee aur haiN

Thanx for breaking silence. That’s all I wished