farooqahmad, you can post only your own poetry here :)
Tujhay jab say dekha hai jana....
yeah bhi na jana kay kyaa kaihyga zamana...
sari Rasmoon ko bhoola kayyy...
Ajjta ahai teray pehlo main yeah dewana...
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Aaj shayed ummeed bar aaye
Kaash wo phir kaheeN nazar aaye
YouN to har shaakh par parinday haiN
Rashk un per jo zeest uR aaye
"ye"
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Aasif Saahab....Bohat Aa'la.......
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Yaas k baam par jo dar aaye
Aas ki koi to khabar aaye
Ham bichaaye huey they aankhon ko
Aur wo dushmanon k ghar aaye
ye
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Ye Nigaah Kesi Nigaah hay
Jo hay Qehr, aur Shifa bhi hay
Meri rooh ko bhi Jala na day
Kay Saza bhi, aur ada bhi hay
Ye ... again :)
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yeh tere talkh nawaaiyan koi or seh ker to dikha day
yeh jo hum main tum main nibah hay mere hoslay ka kamal hay
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Zaamil, umdaa!!
Yaad tum raat har peher aaye
Qarar-e-dil magar kidhar aaye
tere jaane pe qatl-e-zauq hua
saare ash'aar be-asar aaye
yeh saleeqa hay dostee ka teree?
dushmanoN se nibaah kar aaye
"ye"
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Tere jaane pe qatl-e-zauq hua saare ash'aar be-asar aaye
Zabardast....Bohat Aa'la...
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(Qit'a)
Yaar k baam par qamar aaye
Ham sa taara kahan nazar aaye
Is haqeeqat ko jaante hain ham
Jaane phir kiyun ye aankh bhar aaye
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ye
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Yaad bhi kesa ajeeb marham hey
aur bhi zakhm kureyd deta hey
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Yaad wo aaj is qadar aaye
khushk aaNkhoN maiN samandar aaye
Teree jaanib jo uthaya hay qadam
Har aik simt se pathar aaye
**"ye"
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Yoon to raste mein shaam kar aaye
Shukr phir bhi, k naama-bar aaye
Mujh pe sau baar sang-baari ho
Koi tohmat na us k sar aaye
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ye
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Beautiful Zamil :k: … Bohat khoobsoorat zameen hey. May I also use your zameen, if you don’t mind? 
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Yaas ney pehan leeye foran aas ke kaprey
hum juNhi milney usey us ke ghar aaey
hum ney poocha to haNs ke kehney lagi
ashq to aaNkhoN meiN yuNhi bhar aaey
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**Bohat shukria janaab…lekin ye zameen meri nahi Aasif Sahab ki hai… **
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youN khamshee maiN baat kar aaye
aNsuoN kee zabaan laR aaye
Un ke aane se youN laga jaise
Toot'tay khaab mo'atabar aaye
Taiz barish maiN khailte bach'che
dhoop niklee to rooth kar aaye
"y"
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Ye raah wo hai k raahein hazaar hain jis mein
Ye kya k ek hi raste pe chalte jaate ho
Wafa ka naam faqat ab hai bas kitaabon mein
Or ek tum ho, mohabbat mein jalte jaate ho
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wao
(main ne socha ab zara track change kia jaaye :-)
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Don't worry Zamil, Mr Asif does not even know that we were using his zameen :)
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Wo daag yaadoN ke bad’numa tu ney mitaaey to heiN par sab nahi
masiha-e-waqt merey zehan par aesey kuch nishaaN abhi aur heiN
abhi kaavishoN meiN lagey raho zara saaNs leney ko ruko nahi
mujhey hey yaqeeN yaheiN aas paas naey aasmaaN abhi aur heiN
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Amal,
Funny, you are saying that. I bet you haven't been reading or paying attention to our (Zamil's and mine) qat'aat back to back using my "zameen". But then again, this is not the first time I have been under rated. Agar aap humare asha'r per gaur farmate to yeh yaqeenan na kehtay.
Riyaayat-e-laffazee kay gaurakh dhande sabhee jante haiN magar ma'anee bharay sha'er kehnaa ba'az logoN ke ikhtyar maiN hee hota hay.
When you used my zameen, I didn't feel violated because just by using the last similar word, you don't really use the zameen, you have to also use the same rythm and tempo which apparantly was missing in your version of my zameen so I have to say that you didn't do "Insaaf" with my zameen.
Having said that, please let me use your zameen now, if you don't mind, starting with "Noon."
NaheeN dushmanoN ko khabar huee maire Saai'baN abhee aur haiN
maire qatiloN ko naheeN pata meire meherbaaN abhee aur haiN
unheeN raastoN pe puhaNch gaye, jahaN ibtidaa-e-safar huaa
humaiN manziloN ka gumaan thaa jahaaN karwaaN abhee aur haiN
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Thanx for breaking silence. That’s all I wished
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Hein hum bhi wohi
Ho tum bhi wahi
Phir kya gharoor karte ho
Agar jana hai dono ne wahi
Like uhh this maybe ? :$