Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
such a nice shair sara keep goin:)
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
*hans ke faramaate hain vo dekh kar haalat merii
kyon tum aasaan samajhate the muhabbat merii
*
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
is qadar toot kay na cha mujhay
bhool jaye gi apni rah mujhay
sirf itna khayal rakh laina
pyar tum say hai baypanah mujhay
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
wow…what a beautiful verse :k: Thanx Rabia 
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Yaad-e-maazi azaab hay ya-rab
cheehn lay mujhsay haafza mera
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
***Ab ke mausam kee ada dekh kay yaad aaya hay,*
kis qadar jald badal jaate haiN insaN janaN
**
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Asif yeh shair (ab kay) nahi (yonhi)say start hai.
(yonhi mausam kia ada daikh ker yaad aya hai.....)
NAJANAY KIYUN HUMAIN TUM PER BARA BHAROSA HAI
KHAYAL RAKHNA KAY QAYAM YEH AITBAR RAHAY
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Yeh jo bandagaan e niyaaz hain Yeh tamaam hain wahi lashkari
Jinhain zindagi nay amaan na di tou tayray huzoor main aa gaey
Tayri bay rukhi kay diyar main,main hawa kay saath hawa huwa
Tayray aainay ki talash main mayray khwaab chahraya ganwaa gaey
Yay
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
ye shararat bhara lehja to meri aadat hi **
**tu har ik baat pe yun nam na kia kar aankhain :)
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
**naqsh fariyadi hai kis ki shoKhi-e-tahreer ka
kagazi hai pairahan har paikar-e-tasveer ka **
***(alif)
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Idhar aa kaleje se tujh ko laga loon
Tujhi pe to dil aa gaya hai kisi ka
Zara daal de apni zulfon ka saaye
Muqaddar bohat na-rasa hai kisi ka
alif
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Usi se pochey koi dasht ki rafaqat jo
Ankh kholey to paharoon ka silsila dekhey
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
***ye bhi kia shaam-e-mulaqat aai
lab pe mushkil se teri baat aai
subah se chup hain tere hijr naseeb
haaye kia hoga agar raat aai ***
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
yeh begana rawi pehley nahi thi
kahoo tum phir kisi ke ho gaye kia
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
A'qal ko fursat nahiN tanqeed say
IshQ par aamal ki buniad rakh
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Sara farooqui, its good one, your choice is nice.
"Hum teri mast nigahi ka bha'rm rakh laiN gay
hoosh aaya bi to keh deiNgay hameN hoosh nahiN"
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Na sawal e wasl,na arz e ghum,na hikayatain na shikayatain
Tayray ahad main dil e zaar kay sabhi ikhtiyaar chalay gaey
yay
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Yeh kahaN ki dosti hay k banaY haiN dost nasaY
Koi chara-saz hota, koi gham- gusar hota;
'alif
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Aa kah ab tasleem kar lain tou naheen to main sahi
Kaun manay ga kah hum main baywafa koi naheen
Noon
Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006
Wah ji wah sab ne hi mashAllah ek se ek she'r phainka hai bohat khoob...!