Bait Bazi â€” I-2006

Amal · April 18, 2006, 10:09pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

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Ye ajeeb kehil hey ishq ka meiN aap deikha ye moaj'za
wo jo lafz merey ghumaaN meiN the, wo teri zubaaN pe aa gaey

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sara_farooqui · April 19, 2006, 3:42am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Yaan piyas ka izhar malmat hai gunah hai
phoolon se kabhi titliya pocha nahi kertin

Amal · April 19, 2006, 11:34am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

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Naam likhtey heiN tera likh ke mitta detey heiN
hum yuNhi dil ko mohabbat ki sazaa detey heiN

Noon
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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 19, 2006, 1:13pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

''Noor'' jo naseeb mein likh diya geya merey
daaman-e-hayaat sey chun rahii huun lafz lafz

Amal · April 19, 2006, 1:22pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

:halo:

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 19, 2006, 1:39pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

sheir acha nahi hay ya 'zoein' :-(

Zahir ki aankh say na tamasha karey koii
ho dekhna tou deed-e-dil wa karey koii

Amal · April 19, 2006, 1:42pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

'zoein' ho ya 'toeiN', wo masla nahi...lekin hameiN to sheir hi samajh nahi aaya :(

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 19, 2006, 1:48pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Oh acha ok here is 2nd Try:-)
Nahin zarorii key har ajnabi ki baat suno
har ik sadaa peh dharakna bhi dil ka farz nahi

Amal · April 19, 2006, 2:05pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

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Zarf ki baat hey Mohsin warna kehney ko
qad meiN insaan sey to saaya bhi barra hota hey
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Amal · April 19, 2006, 2:09pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

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Ye kon chupke sey tanhaaiyoN meiN kehta hey
merey baghaer sakooN umr bhar nahi milna
juda jab bhi huwey to dil ko yuN laga
ke ab gaey to kabhi laot kar nahi milna
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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 19, 2006, 3:02pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Aahat hay na jhonka hay, na khushbu hay na dastak
phir kis nay mujhay khawaab say be-daar kiya hay

Amal · April 19, 2006, 3:07pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

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YuNhi chaand agar kabhi gussey meiN taaroN sey larrey to kya ho ga!
kisi roz yuNhi zid meiN aa kar na raat dhaley to kya ho ga
tera naam hi aaya tha lab par ke saari khal'qat cheekh utthi
tera haath pakarr kar sarrkoN par terey saath chaley to kya ho ga!
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GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 19, 2006, 3:14pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Ik aas hay keh roshnii barsey gii aik din
madham say kuch chiragh hawa k safar mein hain

sara_farooqui · April 20, 2006, 3:35am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Njaney kab meri duniya mai muskuraye ga
Wo aik shakhs ke khawabon mai bhi khafa sa lagey

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 20, 2006, 8:43am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

yad atie hean door kie bataein
piyar sea deikhta he jub koe

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · April 20, 2006, 11:15am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Yaad karnay kay siwaa ab kar bhi kya saktey hain hum
bhool jaanay mein tujhay na-kaam ho janay kay baad

''daal''

being_lonely · April 20, 2006, 12:01pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Dil ko sehra kijiye ,aankhon ko darya kijiye
iss tarah bhi aik din apna tamashaa kijiye:)

nia_khan · April 20, 2006, 3:30pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Ufffffffffffffffff! kahtaam hai shairi ap pe amaal ji - subhanAllah

gul-e- tasbeh

Aahat hay na jhonka hay, na khushbu hay na dastak
phir kis nay mujhay khawaab say be-daar kiya hay

aaheeen… behad kobsuraat

Amal · April 20, 2006, 5:51pm

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

I will forward your comments to Amjad Islam Amjad

By the way, agar Bait Bazi meiN tashreef ley hi aai theiN aap to aek, aadha sheir hi likh jaana tha

sara_farooqui · April 21, 2006, 5:26am

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Yoon to mai hans para hon tumharey iye mager
kitney sitarey toot parey aik hansi ke sath