Bait Bazi — I-2006

Rules of Bait Bazi:
1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
6. Avoid posting film songs.

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Dil pe kartey heiN dimaaghoN pe asar kartey heiN
hum ajab log heiN zehnoN meiN safar kartey heiN

Next: “noon”
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Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

:o ye tu Nikami ne shoro karna the kheR

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*nahi kuch khabaR k kis ghaRi terey rastoN ka sira miley*
*** tereY naqsh-e-pa ki talash meiN lagi to hai meri justuju****

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Woh Multafit hoN tau Ka'Nj-e-Qafa's bhee Aazaadi!
Naa hoN tau Sehn-e-Chaman bhee Muqaam-e-Majboori!

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

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Ye khaab hey ke azaab hey ye morr hey ke saraab hey
yahaN har taraf heiN manzileiN par raastoN ka pata nahi

Next: "ye"
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Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Amal bhai .. yeh cheating hai :p

hum tau NaheeN maiN "noon Ghhunna" lagaataY haiN... aap nay Nahi a'nil munkar walaa nahi daY diya hum ko.. hum tau Noon ghhunna walaa sher sunnaYeN geY :D

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Anwaar ye "NaheeN" nahi hey na. Ye "nahi" hey aur nahi ye par hi khatm hota hey, anyway, aap noon ghhunna laga lo :)

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

***ye talsim-e-deed ka rang hai k ja'nooN ka koi taRang hai*** ***ye qadam qadam teRi aa'hataiN ye nazaR nazaR teRi suRtaiN *** next"noon"

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

**Nahi ab to koi malaal bhi kisi waapsi ka khayaal bhi
gham-e-be'kasi ney mita dia merey dil meiN tha bhi agar koi

Next: "ye"

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Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

**ye chiraagh-e-jaaN bhi ajeeb hey ke jala huwa hey abhi talak** **teri bewafaai ki aaNdhiyaaN to kabhi ki aa ke guzar gaeeN** **"noon"**

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

**Na seeo hont, na khaaboN meiN jagaa do hum ko
maslehat ka ye taqaazaa hey bhulaa do hum ko
hum haqeeqat heiN to phir tasleem na karny ka sabab!
haan ager harf-e-ghalat heiN to mitaa do hum ko

Next: "wao"
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Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Woh khwaab daykhay tou daykhay mairay hawalay say **
**Mairay khayal kah sab manzaroon ka sathi ho

Main us say jhootbhiboloon tou mujh say sach bolay
*Mairay mizaaj kay sab mausamoon ka saathi ho *


** "Wao"**

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

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Wo apney mathey pey jhoote rog saja ke phirtey heiN
hum apni ankhooN ke jaltey zakhm chupatey rehtey haiN

"Noon"
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Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

na gharaz kise se na waasta mujhey kaam apne kaam se tereY zikeR se teri fiker se reri Yaad se tere naam se teri Subh-o-aish hai Kya bala tujhey aiy falak jo ho hausla kabi karle aa k mukabla gham-e-hijer-e-Yaar ki shaam se

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

**Ye alag baat hey ke taameer nahi ho saktey
warna har zehan meiN kuch Taj Mehal hotey heiN

"noon"
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Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

na sadaf bani na guhaR huwi yunhi jalti bhujti basaR huwie
kabhi zindghi k chiRaag ki na he shab dhali na sehaR huwie
meRi khamoshi meray khawab thay tRi ahtooN k sarab they
ka'ee raastooN se guzaR k be cha'h jiN ki gard-e-safaR huwie

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

jano g what is next word.... ye? agar yehi hai to her is my shair :D

Ye tumhari talkh nawaiya koi aur sah kar dekha to day
ye jo hum main tum mai nibah hai mery hoslay ka kamal hai

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

*chando g wesay sher ap ne idher udher kar dya hia kher:p* ***
ye na ho tum kabhi usko mitana chaho na mitte *** ***mujhe apna samjh lena magar apna nahi likhna*** ***"alif"***

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

aya hi tha khyal kay ankhain chalak gaye
ansoo kisi ki yaad mai kitnay kareeb hain

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006


na thei haal ki jab hamin apnaY khabaR rahya dekhtey aurooN k aay-b hunaR
paRi apni buraa'yeooN pe jo nazaR tu nighah main koi buRa na raha

Re: Bait Bazi — I-2006

Ik Chand ki talaash main ghomain nagar nagar
Lotay tu Aasmaan nay sitaray bujha diye..........