Adaab Dostoo,
Bait-Baazi ke aik aur naye silsilay ke sath hum aap ki khidmat mein haazir hain … Aap se umeed hai ke aap apni bhar-poor participation rakhenge …
Posting Rules
Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.
Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.
Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.
If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).
Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.
Avoid posting film songs.
jiia
August 31, 2010, 9:43pm
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Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
rail ki cete mi kasay hijr ki tamheed thi
osko rukhsat kar k ghar lotay to andaza hua parveen shakar
alif
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
Itni shiddat se woh shaks meri raggoon mein uttar gaya hai
Ke ussay bhoolnay ke leye mujhe marna hoga ...
"Alif"
elaaf
September 1, 2010, 7:43am
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Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
"Aey Khuda! Tunay Mohabbat banai kyun hai *
* * Gar Banai hai tou phir iss main Judai Kyun hai"**
"Yeh"
*
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
nice
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
Yeh To Mumkin Hay Kay Woh Saath Rahay Baat Na Ho
Yeh Bhala Kiyu'n Ho Kay Woh Baat Karay Dil Na Dukhay
"yeh"
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
Yeh kya sittam ke zindagi har pal hai imtehaan
Aur aakhirat mein ja ke bhi dena hai hisaab ...
"Bay"
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
baat woo adhi raat ki, raat woo poray chand ki.......
chand bhi aaieen cheeat ka, us pay tera jamal bhi...
(Parveen shakir)
"yeh"
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
**Naa muhabbat naa dostii ke liye
waqt rukataa nahi kisii ke liye
dil ko apane sazaa na de yun hii
is zamaane kii berkhi ke liye
**
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
Yeh marhalla bhi muhabbat mein khush-gawar raha
Uljahna tum se, tumhari hi aarzoo karna ...
"Alif"
jiia
September 1, 2010, 10:04am
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Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
yi ajeeb mizag ka shayhar hi yaha faslay say mila karo
koe naz b na mila ay ga jo...........................................
i gorget next after long time iam coming to my root have
no source no book even forget holding qalam thanks gs
to connectng my roots not yet fully tryng
jiia
September 1, 2010, 10:06am
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Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
koe nazar b na milaay ga jo
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
*gar ham na hote to tujhe Gazal kaun kehta
Tere Chehre ko Kamal kaun kehta
Yeh to karishma hai Mohabbat ka
Warna paththaron ko Taj Mahal kaun kehta!
*
jiia
September 1, 2010, 10:23am
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Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
ab k baras hum gulshan walay apna hissa pura layngay
kanton ko taqseem karayn gay phulun ko taqseem karayn gay
saghar sadiqi
yah
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
buhat khoob
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
*Yeh jo zarrd pattay hawwa main hain aur saard mossam fiza main hai
Yeh too mootiya hai terii yaad kaa, meray chaar soo fizaa main hai
*
jiia
September 1, 2010, 10:34am
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Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
ankhayn moond kinaray baytho,man k rakho baand kivad
insha g lo dhaga lo or lab se lo,khamosh raho
wao
Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
**
Waqtai rukhsat Jo Nishani Talab Ki Tu Kahne Lage
Daagh Kafi Hai Judai Ka Agar Yaad Rahe.......!
**
jiia
September 1, 2010, 10:52am
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Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition
yi tujh kojagtay rahnay ka shoq kab say hua
mujay to khay tayra intzar karna hay
muhsin naqvi
yay