Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

Adaab Dostoo,

Bait-Baazi ke aik aur naye silsilay ke sath hum aap ki khidmat mein haazir hain … Aap se umeed hai ke aap apni bhar-poor participation rakhenge …

Posting Rules

  1. Shair should be genuine and not your own. Post your own in Bait Bazi — Personal Edition of Sho’ra-e-Gupshup.

  2. Dont break the chain and always follow the last letter of the last posted shair.

  3. Always mention the last urdu alphabet of your shair.

  4. If you know the name of the poet, mention that (for other’s knowledge sake).

  5. Do not write out the whole ghazal/nazam; only two shairs (i.e. Rubai, qita) at max will be allowed.

  6. Avoid posting film songs.

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

rail ki cete mi kasay hijr ki tamheed thi
osko rukhsat kar k ghar lotay to andaza hua parveen shakar

                           alif

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

Itni shiddat se woh shaks meri raggoon mein uttar gaya hai
Ke ussay bhoolnay ke leye mujhe marna hoga ...

"Alif"

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

"Aey Khuda! Tunay Mohabbat banai kyun hai *
*
* Gar Banai hai tou phir iss main Judai Kyun hai"**

"Yeh"
*

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

nice

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

Yeh To Mumkin Hay Kay Woh Saath Rahay Baat Na Ho
Yeh Bhala Kiyu'n Ho Kay Woh Baat Karay Dil Na Dukhay

"yeh"

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

Yeh kya sittam ke zindagi har pal hai imtehaan
Aur aakhirat mein ja ke bhi dena hai hisaab ...

"Bay"

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

baat woo adhi raat ki, raat woo poray chand ki.......
chand bhi aaieen cheeat ka, us pay tera jamal bhi...

(Parveen shakir)

"yeh"

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

http://urdustar.com/home/attachments/urdu-shayri-designs/83224d1254511256-desine-ashar-bait-bazi-3-tanhaai-jpg

“Noon”

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

**Naa muhabbat naa dostii ke liye
waqt rukataa nahi kisii ke liye

dil ko apane sazaa na de yun hii
is zamaane kii berkhi ke liye
**

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

Yeh marhalla bhi muhabbat mein khush-gawar raha
Uljahna tum se, tumhari hi aarzoo karna ...

"Alif"

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

yi ajeeb mizag ka shayhar hi yaha faslay say mila karo
koe naz b na mila ay ga jo...........................................

i gorget next after long time iam coming to my root have
no source no book even forget holding qalam thanks gs
to connectng my roots not yet fully tryng

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

koe nazar b na milaay ga jo

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

*gar ham na hote to tujhe Gazal kaun kehta
Tere Chehre ko Kamal kaun kehta
Yeh to karishma hai Mohabbat ka
Warna paththaron ko Taj Mahal kaun kehta!
*

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

ab k baras hum gulshan walay apna hissa pura layngay
kanton ko taqseem karayn gay phulun ko taqseem karayn gay
saghar sadiqi

                                                                       yah

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

buhat khoob

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

*Yeh jo zarrd pattay hawwa main hain aur saard mossam fiza main hai
Yeh too mootiya hai terii yaad kaa, meray chaar soo fizaa main hai
*

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

ankhayn moond kinaray baytho,man k rakho baand kivad
insha g lo dhaga lo or lab se lo,khamosh raho

                                            wao

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

**
Waqtai rukhsat Jo Nishani Talab Ki Tu Kahne Lage

Daagh Kafi Hai Judai Ka Agar Yaad Rahe.......!
**

Re: Bait Baazi - Sep-10 Edition

yi tujh kojagtay rahnay ka shoq kab say hua
mujay to khay tayra intzar karna hay
muhsin naqvi

                                                            yay