Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

coin · January 4, 2011, 6:08am

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bohot khub

KKF · January 4, 2011, 6:13am

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thank you bro :)

Shazia_Arif · January 4, 2011, 6:44am

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v nice KKF but if m not mistaken last word was daal.

KKF · January 4, 2011, 6:55am

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**
thank you so much...yes, i apologize...i'm sorry...i thought i had to just post our own ash'aar...kinda got carried away :(

dil par kisi ne Husn kaa naqsha jamaa diyaa
Khaaliq kii rah-guzar ko kaleesa banaa diyaa
**

Amal · January 4, 2011, 1:55pm

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You should write more seriously and regularly Shazia. You have strong subjects :k: … Keep it up

Amal · January 4, 2011, 1:57pm

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**
Dard ke mosam meiN barsey heiN bohat rog
naazuk the jin ke dil wo ghaail heiN sabhi log**

"Gaaf"

sfaseehrabbani · January 4, 2011, 6:58pm

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Ghar banane ki aarzoo hae FaSeeH
eeNT gara talash kertay heiN

Noon

Shazia_Arif · January 5, 2011, 8:10am

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thanx Amal,
nadaa(n) samajh baithe mujh ko to sabhi log
zindagi kay hjay kya hain ye pooch baitha tha...

Sannan · January 5, 2011, 2:18pm

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Shazia awesome

Amal · January 5, 2011, 4:14pm

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She is in full form these days

sfaseehrabbani · January 5, 2011, 6:45pm

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ایک جیسے ہیں سبھی موسم اسے
صحن میں رکھی رہی بوڑھے کی کھاٹ

Aik jaisay heiN sabhi mowsam issay
SaHn meN rakhkhi rahi booRhay ki khhaT

Te

Amal · January 5, 2011, 8:07pm

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Faseeh** bhai is sheir kuch tashreeh kareiN ge please? Meian samajh nahi paaya ke aap kehna kya chaah rahey heiN.
Secondly, ye "khhaT" kya hey? Ky aap ghaat kehna chaah rahey heiN ya kuch aur?

KKF · January 5, 2011, 8:11pm

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khaaT = palang/chaarpaaii

KKF · January 5, 2011, 8:19pm

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**Harf-e-"Tha" se koi she'r meraa apnaa mere paas nahiiN thaa is liye abhii taaza ba taaza fil-badeeh yeh she'r ho gayaa...its like FRESH from the OVEN...hehe

Thumkaa lagaa ke yaar ne kal shab kahaa k sun
tu kiuN paRaa huaa hai Tharra lagaa ke Tun!!!**

Amal · January 5, 2011, 8:20pm

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Shukriya Khalil bhai :)

Amal · January 5, 2011, 8:23pm

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Oh my God, Khalil bhai… Aap ney chaa gaey bas

KKF · January 5, 2011, 8:29pm

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shukria bhai aapkaa

**
shukri ek baar phir se. are nahiiN janaab…bas tukbandi ho gai.

aap ne she’r marHamat nahiiN farmaayaa?**

Amal · January 5, 2011, 8:48pm

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Aap ney to ba'qaeda sheir kaha, tuk'bandi to ye hoti hey:

*Na chahatey huwey bhi chorr kar aana parra usey
wo imtihaaN meiN na aatey huwey sawaaloN ki tarha tha
*

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 5:14am

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acha tareeeeeeeef…

Shazia_Arif · January 6, 2011, 6:02am

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ikk daar pe latka hun muddat se ikk laash ki tara
kuch pechtawe noch rhe hain kirgass ban ker...