Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)
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Bait Baazi — Personal Edition is back. It’s a modified version of Bait Baazi for Sho’ra-e-Gupshup with a simple difference of poster being the author! Unlike the Intikhaab’s Bait Baazi, work of others is not allowed here AT ALL. To exactly match the theme of this forum — please post your own aashaar only! Every participant is requested to please strictly adhere to this restriction or otherwise the fun will go. That’s all guys :slight_smile:

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Lamha khushi ka ho ya gharri dil dukhaaney ki
usey har baat pe aadat thi muskuraaney ki
morr judaai ka aaya to toot ke roney laga
hum ney koshish to bohat ki usey samjhaney ki
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"Ye"

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last sher of my new poem:

Yeh Naa-pe'd Ishq kay roz-o-Shab
Woh Piyaar kee shaam deewaani see

Ye

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Looks very promising…baaqi ki poem kahaN hey bhai??? :~)

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as always, in my journal :)

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**Yak'dam sey aa jatey heiN ik saath kai aazaab
museebatoN ka wesey koi mosam nahi hota
zillat aur ruswai bas reh jaati hey ik shanaakht
haarey huwey lashkar ka koi parcham nahi hota

"Alif"
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Ankhoon Ankhoon main hum tumhare ho ge
Bataon bataon main tum hamare ho ge

                                              (YE)
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Ye taqdeer ki heiN chaaleiN ke badli hui hey baazi
jo mera chaara-gar tha meiN usi ka hooN nishaana**
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Ab yahaaN kis ney guzarna hey Amal saari raat
tum chiraagoN ko jalaa kar yuN na beittha karo
**"Wao"

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Wafa ki ik khuwahish thi wafa ke siley meiN
kon hey jo mohabbat ka sila maang'taa nahi
jeeney ki talab meiN martey heiN baar baar
kuch logoN ka muqaddar kabhi jaag'taa nahi
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"Ye"

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Yaas ho ke aas ho ke janm-o-janam ki piyaas ho
khud kisi ke qareeb ho ya koi dil ke paas ho
kya duwaeiN maangni taqeer sey haalaat ki
agar kisi ko kushi ka koi lamha na raas ho

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"wao"

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waqt milney pe shaaid lout aaey wuh bhi
tum dil ki baat sar-e-aam yun na likha karo

sheir kuch sahi nahi bana par whatever:-)

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Very nice Pakeeza :k:

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Wo falak ko tak ke karney lagi mojzoN ki baat
meiN sochney laga umeed ki ye soghaat aakhri hey
meiN ney kaha ab aas ka naya kheil kya kheileiN
ke khuwaahishoN ki bisaat par ye maat aakhri hey
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“Ye”

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insha_ji yeh aap ne kab likha tha shair:confused: :faizy: tussi te bade budhe nikle:D

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ye duniya yeh mehfil mere kaam ki nahi
kis ko sunaon haal dile be karar ka
bujhta howa howa charagh hoon apne mizar ka

A

bus daikh lo ;)

Insha uncle ye kaam yahaaN nahi chaley ga. Read the post#1 :)

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Ye sochtey huwey so gaya ik bhooka be'chaara
chand dinoN ke faaqoN sey koi marta nahi hey!
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"Ye"

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Well is there an editing option here :)

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^ I hope you would have found the Edit button by now :~)

Ye duwaaeiN saari ye sadaaeiN saari, ye man'natoN ke chiraagh saarey
inhey rah'guzar meiN saja ke har shab, tu kis ko takta hey be'khudi meiN!

"Noon"

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v nice one :)

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Naqsh bantey heiN bigarr jaatey heiN
jaesey log mil ke bicharr jaatey heiN
:clown: