Bait Baazi — Personal Edition

Pakeeza · February 1, 2007, 11:02am

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That is something :k:

insha_ji · February 1, 2007, 3:43pm

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arz kia hey apni shairi me se ik shair Noon ke hawale se

Nigahain thien onki jhooki howin
meri saansain thi keh rooki howin
lehje mein unke ik irteaash howa
jub kaha mujhe tum se piyar howa

Alif

Amal · February 2, 2007, 12:47pm

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NikamiJi and Pakeeza, thanx for the appreciation :)

Amal · February 6, 2007, 1:27pm

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**
Aey gheirat-e-momin tujhey jaagna hey aaj
ke ik aur Karbala ka tujhey saamna hey aaj
apnoN ki be'hisi ka gila phir kabhi sahi
qatil sey apna khoon-baha maangna hey aaj

**"Jeem"

Lovely_Me · February 6, 2007, 2:12pm

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jis lakir se humay dar lagta hai
wo hai dosti ki lakir
itnay kareeb mat aao
becharnay se dar lagta
tum pe tu bahrosa hai
bas apni takdeer se dar lagta hai!
:)

insha_ji · February 6, 2007, 2:20pm

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yeh mohabet bhi ajeb cheez hey Shah ji
kerti kuch hey or kehti kuch or hey

ye

rabia_rana · February 7, 2007, 10:38am

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yon tu sarkar se awam ko umeed nahi
phir bhi ik himmat e iltaja tu ki jaye

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 7, 2007, 10:57am

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Thats good:-)

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 7, 2007, 10:58am

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Buhat khoob :k:

rabia_rana · February 8, 2007, 8:19am

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nice
JO GHAIRAT E MOMIN HAI WOHI HAI KARBALA KI SHAN
WO SHAN K JIS PER HUI AAL E RUSUL(S.A.W) QURBAN

insha_ji · February 8, 2007, 5:26pm

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are you guyz posting your own shairs here or someone else.. rabia

rabia_rana · February 9, 2007, 8:28am

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yes,we r ......................this is SHO'RA E GS forum so its necessary to post ur own poetry here

insha_ji · February 9, 2007, 2:22pm

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good good

Amal · February 11, 2007, 2:25pm

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Naam aatey hi tera hoNtoN par
phool khiltey heiN lafz ban, ban kar

"Rey"

NikamiJano · February 12, 2007, 1:34pm

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Really that’s nice

GuL-e-Tasbeeh · February 12, 2007, 2:38pm

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Raat din subh-o- shaam
letey hein hum tera hi naam
sheir lag raha hey ya

rabia_rana · February 12, 2007, 3:01pm

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wah wah wah.Amal jee a ki kitta tussi ek wari fhair lout lay gay tussi mahfil.............

rabia_rana · February 12, 2007, 3:02pm

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Raat azar kiyun na ban jaye??
Dil pay yadon nai teer tana hai

insha_ji · February 12, 2007, 3:21pm

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Yeh chand sa mukhra or qaatil nigahain
mujhe loot leti hain teri kaafir adaiain

_Masoom_Muskaan · February 14, 2007, 10:08am

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langweilig ?:)