Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**Uss ko chor ker hanstey howey ghar aa kay
Itna roye thay keh aankhon nay shikayat ki thee
Yey**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**Uss ko chor ker hanstey howey ghar aa kay
Itna roye thay keh aankhon nay shikayat ki thee
Yey**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**yaad nahin kya kya dekha tha saare manzar bhul gaye
us kee galiyon se jab laute apana bhi ghar bhul gaye
"yeh"
**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
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** dil ney chupkey sey tera naam pukara hoga**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
**aaj kee raat bh guzari hai merii kal kee tarah
haath aaye na sitaare tere aanchal kee tarah
"hey"
**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
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** terii yaadeiN bhulaney ko buhat samaan rakha hey**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
^ Bohat acha sheir likha tha aap ney. Aur sheir kiuN nahi kehti aap isi behar meiN?
Ye kon dil ke andheroN sey shaam hotey hi chiraagh ley ke guzarta dikhaai deta hey
"Ye"
thanx Amal,bas jab se ap baitbazi mai nhi ate meri fankarana salahiyaton ko zang lag gya hai...kis k sath muqabla karun sher-o-shairi ka :(
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yun to aye bazm-e-jahan dilkash thay hangame tere
ikk zara afsurdagi tere tamashaion main thi...
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yunhi beysabab na phira kero, koi shaam ghar b raha kero
wo ghzal ki suchi kitaab hai, ussay chupke chupke parha kero
"wow"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yunhi beysabab na phira kero... "wow"
Mera bhi yehi mashwara hey aap ko :)
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
thanx Amal,bas jab se ap baitbazi mai nhi ate meri fankarana salahiyaton ko zang lag gya hai...kis k sath muqabla karun sher-o-shairi ka :(
I know...inshaallah jald hi silsila phir sey shuru karooN ga :)
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
"Noon"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Mera bhi yehi mashwara hey aap ko :)
is k ilawa koi chara b tu nhe =/
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
nhe hota kabhi jo raabta Us se mera Mohsin
mae khud mei doob jata hoon, wo mujh ko mujh mien milta hai
"yeh"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
Yeh dil hi jaanta hai k kis hauslay kay saath
Na-qadri -e- mataa -e- hunar daikhtay rahay
"Yay "
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
yaaraan e jahan kahty hain kashmir hai jannat
** jannat kisi kaffar ko nah mili hai nah mily gee**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
ye jo apni jan se guzar gay,unhain kya khabar k sheher main
kisi jan nisaar ka zikr kya,koi sogwar b ab nhi...
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
neendoN ki baghawat se ye nuQsaan howa haii
ik shaks k khwaabo`N ko tarastii rahii aankhieN
"noon"
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
neend se khwab main uter jaye
admi khamoshi se mar jaye
ikk taraf aag,ikk taraf pani
admi jaye to kidher jaye :(
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
:k:
**Ye bhi acha hai nibhaii ghair se uss ne wafa
Bewafai per bhi mujh ko bewafa acha laga
Alif**
Re: Bait Baazi for the month January 2011
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hum karoroon hain mager phir bhi akeley kyon hain