3 Likes
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
nice :k:
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
nice aryaan :)
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
Bohat shukriya Goodnews, SunnyBoy & Sunny_Nicky..:)
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
buhut hi khoob :)
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
Bohat shukriya NikamiJano & Daanie..:)
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
nice poem Aryaan,
your nazm inspired this set of verses:
no title
kamosh setch kee mala, aur num zabt ka nashe-mun hoon koe
meye bohet bey-zarer see teiree wajhe hoon koe
dil kee dukhan ka zeiver pehan rekha heye meye neye
han, yeye heye zaroor keye shayid,
aik bin-badbaan kee shikara (row-boat in kashmiri language) hoon koe
teireye khiyal kee beye khiyali hoon meye,
tu yeye perrh sekeye tow perh leye
nayeye paniyoon kee talash nahi heye mujheye koe
tu janeye ya na maneye,
teireye na honeye ka aik ishara hoon koe
aaj yoon tu meira asmaan aik chader nahi,
apni ankhoon keyey ansooon kee jheel hoon koe
afsos, ayeye dil,
teiree kismet ka toota huwa aik taara hoon meye
best,
Dushwari
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
Thanks Dushwari…
Teri kismat ka toota huwa aik taara hoon main***… Beautiful lines Dushwari..:k:
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
thanks, Aryaan. your poem is really nice.
good balance.
best,
Dushwari
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
Beautiful..
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
zabardast :k:
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
aya ho jaha say phir jana hai wohi laut wohi ek din Aryaan 
khud ki hai to shoara-e-gupshup mai kyu nahi :aq:
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
Ghalti se yahaan post kar di, Aap move kar dijie na..
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
wot?? ye move ho gaya? to the other section? grrrrr!
Re: ~~Awaara Baadal~~
Accha to janab likhtay bhi hain …ye to hamay pata hi nahi thi 