Another one of my own.......

Dilsay · April 14, 2003, 3:07pm

** Tumhain talash karoo magar waqat nahi milta Tumhari yaad say baas waqat nahi milta

Aapnay dil kay tukray samait kar rahay hai
Inhain joornay ka magar aab waqat nahi milta

Main tari yaad ka hisa tha kabhi magar aab
Mari he yaad kay liy tum ko waqt nahi milta

Ya justjoo hai kiya ya koshshain hain kasi
Unhain Khuda nahi milta jinahain sanam nahi milta

Tari yaad ko Dilsay laga kar rakha hai
Kisi kam kay liya aab waqat nahi milta**

by Dilsay

Dostoon ka itaraz par change kaiya hai original is as below:

Tari yaad ko Dilsay laga kar rakha hai
Kisi namaz kay liya aab waqat nahi milta

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 14, 2003, 3:10pm

Re: Another one of my own…

boht borie bat hei :nono:

Khanzada · April 14, 2003, 4:57pm

^ bilkul. kaam dhanday apni jaga par namaz ke liay to time nikaalna chahiay

Bauhat khoob :k:

Dilsay · April 14, 2003, 4:59pm

thanks alot baas dil main aya tha likha hai warna namaz tu farz hai agar ya farz ada na howa tu phir baki farzoon ka kiya hoo ga…

Dilsay · April 14, 2003, 4:59pm

Re: Re: Another one of my own…

Thanks alot for mentioning it…

_Nazish · April 14, 2003, 5:11pm

bohat khoob janab :k:

chand_chehra · April 14, 2003, 5:56pm

:k:
keep it up

BrokenSky · April 14, 2003, 6:06pm

Buhat Khoob:flower1: aside from Namaz wala..
:k:…

ghazal_kisi_ke · April 14, 2003, 6:48pm

lajavab:k::k::k:
keep it up:k:

Philanthrope · April 14, 2003, 7:07pm

khoob!

Galaxy · April 14, 2003, 11:29pm

Waqei............buhat khoob...............i guess ke guppies ko namaaz wali baat ke peechay nahi parna chahiye.......we should appreciate it.........insaan khata ka putla hai........aur Dilsay apni ghalti ka khud aitaraaf kar chukey hain....i really appreciate it:D

BrokenSky · April 14, 2003, 11:34pm

to aap HUQ key khilaaf hain:hoonh:…

Swera · April 15, 2003, 2:02am

Re: Another one of my own.......

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Dilsay: *

*

Main tari yaad ka hisa tha kabhi magar aab
Mari he yaad kay liy tum ko waqt nahi milta

[/QUOTE]

Very nice.
Thanks 4 shareing.

:(

Galaxy · April 15, 2003, 2:32am

HUQ ke khilaaf nahi jinaab ghalti key aiteraaf ki baat ho rahi hai

Azad · April 15, 2003, 6:00am

Bohut khoob :k:

_Janu_Jia · April 15, 2003, 6:18am

Re: Another one of my own.......

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Dilsay: *

*
Tumhain talash karoo magar waqat nahi milta
Tumhari yaad say baas waqat nahi milta

Aapnay dil kay tukray samait kar rahay hai
Inhain joornay ka magar aab waqat nahi milta

Main tari yaad ka hisa tha kabhi magar aab
Mari he yaad kay liy tum ko waqt nahi milta

Ya justjoo hai kiya ya koshshain hain kasi
Unhain Khuda nahi milta jinahain sanam nahi milta

Tari yaad ko Dilsay laga kar rakha hai
Kisi kam kay liya aab waqat nahi milta**

by Dilsay

Dostoon ka itaraz par change kaiya hai original is as below:

Tari yaad ko Dilsay laga kar rakha hai
Kisi namaz kay liya aab waqat nahi milta
[/QUOTE]

its very good dilsay :)

[/QUOTE]

Tumharay liyae
Mere mohabbat
Lafzoan say buhat buland hay
Is liyae
Main nay chup rehnay ka faisla ker liya hay

[Last edited by Dilsay on 04-14-2003 at 10:01 AM]
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GIVES ME A HINT.............

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 7:26am

-=Janu Jia=-
Kiya hint doon aap koo... pasand karanay ka shukriya

Azad
Bohat bohat shukriya....

Galaxy
Thanks alot.... and i have changed it

Swera
Thanks alot app ko tu yaad kartay hain

BrokenSky
Thanks i think complain nahi honi chahiya aab

chand_chehra
So nice of you

~Nazish~
Thanks alot

Azad · April 15, 2003, 7:34am

[QUOTE]
Originally posted by Dilsay: *
*-=Janu Jia=-**
** Kiya hint doon aap koo pasand karanay ka?
shukriya **

[/QUOTE]

Dilsay pasand karnay ko dil ki zaroorat hoti hay .. keh hint ki?

_Masoom_Muskaan · April 15, 2003, 8:18am

ab sehee hei :k:

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 10:03am

Masoom Muskaan
Thanks alot and thanks for pointing it out too…