Another one of my own.......

Gizzy · April 15, 2003, 10:19am

Very nice Dilsay..

sigh
**
Main teri yaad ka hisa tha kabhi magar aab
Mari he yaad kay liye tum ko waqt nahi milta*

Sooo touching… I couldn’t express my feelings better..

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 10:38am

Thanks alot… nice to see your comments…

Pramod · April 15, 2003, 11:12am

Dilsay jii,

Yun to aap ne bahot achha likha hai magar ghazal kii technicalities pe gaur kareiN to aap dekhenge ke es mein Kafia theek nahin hai.
soncha aap ko bataa dooN....please don't take it otherwise.

BrokenSky · April 15, 2003, 11:43am

Better:)...

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 11:54am

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by Pramod: *
Dilsay jii,

Yun to aap ne bahot achha likha hai magar ghazal kii technicalities pe gaur kareiN to aap dekhenge ke es mein Kafia theek nahin hai.
soncha aap ko bataa dooN....please don't take it otherwise.
[/QUOTE]

Thanks alot for your advise but as you have mentioned can you please suggest the changes.....

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 5:20pm

[QUOTE]
*Originally posted by BrokenSky: *
Better:)...
[/QUOTE]

:)

_Janu_Jia · April 15, 2003, 5:28pm

khudayaaaa

ufffoo dilsay mil gaih int busss…

HeArT_HaCKeR · April 15, 2003, 5:48pm

Wowwwwwwwwwwwww Dilsay bhai Last shair is superb :k::k::k::k:

KEEP it up

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 5:54pm

mainay tu kuch nahi kaha…

Dilsay · April 15, 2003, 5:56pm

Thanks alot sis…

Pasand karnay ka shukriya…