hey Chica!
come on keep it coming…don’t make us wait so long for the next day!
gr8 story and beautfiully written…keeps one’s interest! :k:
thanx dude! :k:
i will Inshallah try to get it coming… seriously under pressure now hehe..
sadzzz, are you gonna record it on audio cassettes any time soon?
no.... but i may make a movie out of it if i can find the right dan :p
So how visually impaired people like myself are gonna read the story? There got to be some way don't you think?
trust me... its not that good :)
its really good so far.........i wanna read more!!
This might sound like a stupid question but is this a true story? It has the potential of a great chick flick :-p nice effort anyways 
thanx uzzybuzzy and Boss :)
Boss... unfortunately the story isnt true.. but the people (besides dan and usha) are real...
it's been 3 days! :(
sadzzz,thts soo good,do post all of it,or plz pm me:)
about a week now :(
here u go :)
Sara spent the whole Saturday asking me to go to the game. Even Daniyal didnt even seem that bothered. Maivish was also pushing me to go. She said that it would be a good 'outing' for me. I decided to consult Maham. She had the brains and at the moment she wasnt studying.
'I dunno Maham... should I go?" i asked
"I dunno.. go if you want to..." she asid nto even looking at me.
'I dont think i should.. all those other paki boys will be there and so will Anam's hubby, I mean.. I dont think it's a good idea.."
'Yeah...thats true" she replied.." then call him and tell him... "
'Yeah i think i'll have to...".
I felt much better after discussing it with Maham. WIth her, I always felt sure that i'd get the rigth answer. It was like discussing thinkgs with myself but instead someone was actually listening to my loud thoughts.
I decided to call Daniyal, he didnt pick up. I thuogth about sending him a message but then decided that wasnt an appropriate way of explaining to him why i couldnt come. A few hours passed and he still hadnt called. I decided to try just one last time. After about five rings, he picked up.
'hello there...' he said in a very chirpy voice. '..I see someones been chasing me"
'..oh.. I see someones been ignoring me" I laughed
'ignoring!! and me!! whose been ignoring me all week?" he argued ".. no call, no message and not even an email.. hows that for a GOOD friend?"
I laughed at his list of complaints.
'Hey.. you didnt message or call either, mister"
He paused..
"hey this aint a competition...I missed ya!"
"yeah yeah.." i teased him
He was being extremely funny. He spent the first ten minutes telling me about his working week and then about the two new pairs of shoes he bought. I wasnt allowed to interupt him while he described the shoes as it was a very important discussion.
"Are we finished yet?" I asked pretending to be really bored.
"Are we bored yet?" He asked "...ok ok you can tell me about your week... but only this once ok?"
"oh really? my week" I teased "... it was nothing as i didnt get to talk to you.."
He laughed in his normal childish manner
"see... im good fo ryou. Your life is dull without me" he flirted.
"watever!!" I yelled
"waaatttever!" he squealed back immitating me..."so you coming tomorrow?" he asked.. i was in trouble..
"ummm..." i started
"umm.. your not?" he asked
"I dunno Dan.. not sure if its a good idea..."
"what? coming to see me play?... dont worry sweetheart, i'll make sure I hit a six to you.. and if you're lucky, might even give you an autograpgh.. hows that for VIP treatment?"
"its not that you silly... all those paki boys will be there and you know what they're like. They'll make up all kinds of stories"
"hmm" he thought about it "..do you want me to beat them up after the game if they do?"
"Dan!" I yelled
"what?" he replied innocently
"yeah ok.. beat em!!" I laughed
"Na I understand.. I was just curious whether you were my good friend or not" he tried his best to make me feel guilty, and i did..
"im soo sorry.. ok i'll come then" I said and he laughed..
"im only kidding you sad girl... and yes its ok if you dont come.. I was just testing"
"testing what..?"
"how good of a friend you were!"
"Dan!" I screamed again and he started to fool around and made me feel as bad as I could.
Mama was calling me..
"Dan.. i gotta go help with dinner so i'll probably talk to you later ok?"
"cool.. no worries..."
"well have fun tomorrow and dont miss me" I said
"ok.. i wont" he laughed... "hey listen..."
"yeah?"
"I was seriously kidding about tomorrow. Theres all these silly girls that come to the games each week cheering for those other dudes, and they look pathetic"
"so... did you think i was pathetic too?" I teased
"hey! not at all!... i dont think you're pathetic at all... and wont ever will.. so yeah dont come to the games.. well you can come whenever, but.... you know what i mean dont you?" he couldnt quite say wat he wanted.
'yes.. i do.. thanks Dan, means a lot to me" I smiled and felt good.
"good! well then i'll talk to you real soon.. and this time dont ignore me for a week" he said
"i wont.. its a bit hard...ok gotta go!"
"ciao sweetheart..." he said
"ciao..." i replied and hung up.
and heres more :)
it wasnt as hard as i thought it would be. Minus all the guilt treatment, im glad he wasnt upset. And I think he even respects me!
Daniyal called me up on Sunday night to tell me about his game. He said it went really well. Ofcourse, he was the start of the day and helped his team from dying. I wondered, were guys always this involved with themselves? I didnt interupt him, asked questions when necessary and tried to be interested as much as I could. He didnt supsect that I might have been getting bored so I let him continue.
"Hey guess what?" he asked
"what?" I questioned. He would have told me regardless of what i said.
"Usha called today..."
"did she... so what happened" i was curious
"dunno... I was bowling" he laughed "..she must have called during the game"
"didnt you call her back?"
"naa..." he answered
"why?" I asked
"well i can go call her now if you want.. but that would mean i cant talk to you" he said. He was so irritating when he said things like that.
"no.. silly" I felt like telling him he was an idiot " I meant.. arent you going to call her?"
"no.." he got aggitated too ".. I dont feel like getting in a bad mood. I've had a good day, and now im talking to my favourite girl" he continued with the excuses.
"yeah yeah..." i said sarcastically ".. well its up to you.."
"yes.. anyways forget that.. I heard your family is coming over for dinner next week"
"are we..?" i asked. I hadnt heard about anything
"hmm im pretty sure...ami was telling me" he said
"cool..." i said, not really sure whether i should be getting excited or not. I had never been to his house before and well.. never had met him with everyone else around..
"its going to be funny huh" he said "..our families together... kinda wierd"
I thought about it too. I wanted to question him about everything. Ask him about what our parents might be thinknig. Did he even know?
"yeah its going to be very scary Dan.. dunno what our parents are up to..." I replied
"really...?" he asked "what are they upto?"
I wondered whether he was being serious. Did he really now know what our parents could be planning? Does he know what our parents think of our friendship?
"dont you know" i asked ".. they're probably planning the wedding!" I started to laught knowing what i was saying was serious.
"serious?... cool!! I cant wait then" he yelled
"what! are you being serous?" I questioned as my heart started to beat a lil faster then it was 2 seconds ago.
"ofcourse... why wouldnt i be?" he asked politely
"Dan.. please be serious.. just for five minutes" i asked of him
"ok... i can be for longer if you want " he said nicely "shoot... tell me whats on your mind. Doctor Dan is at your service"
"silly..." i smiled "Dan.. do your parents know how often we talk?"
"hmmm.. well i dont tell them everytime i call you.. but yeah they know we're friends" he answered
"ok.." I sighed. I didnt really know what to ask. Even though there were so many things going thru my mind.
"Dan..." I started ".. do you know our parents are thinking something else of this?"
"hmm.. what bout you?" he asked
"what about me?" i questioned back
"what do you think of al this... what do you wanna do?" he asked. I was lost for words. I wanted to tell him that i'd marry him if only he asked. But I didnt..
"i dunno... i think you're great" I finally spoke
"and..?" he asked
"and what?"
"and you dont wanna marry me?" he asked... I was silent.
After a pause, which i thought lasted 12 years, I managed a few words.
"Why? are you asking?"
"do you want me to?" he asked
"i cant make you say things Dan... thats upto you"
"well... " he paused ".. i cant ask you if i dont know how you feel"
This conversation was going nowhere. all I knew was, there was so much I wanted to tell him, but i could only manage tiny cyllables and they explained nothing about how i really felt. I was only twisting his words and asking him questions and he was twisting mine and questioning me.
"well.. if it was upto you.. what would you like me to say?" he said
"well.. one day you will know exactly what you have to say.. and you wont even have to ask me... anyways lets talk about something else"
"ummm.... ok" he wasnt pleased with my repsonse "... hey its getting late.. work tomorrow as well!"
"yeah..." i sighed. I wanted to talk for longer ".. hey Dan, what do you want" I asked. I didnt know where that came from.
"what do I want? hmm... well besides sleep and some nice long holiday on a tropical island.. i dunno" he replied. He wasnt going to be serious.
"ok..." I sighed more
"hey listen... dont get depressed. Lets just go with the flow.. who knows... we might get married!" he laughed
"you wish!" I yelled
"naaaa... you wish..." he replied "ok sweetheart... im off.. you have sweet dreams"
"you too.. Khuda Hafiz" I replied
"Allah Hafiz..." he said and hung up.
:k:
keeps getting better n better !
hehe.. ur making me laff T2.. thanx ;)
Sadzzz,
this is just great!..keep posting!
btw, are u writing this as you go along or is this already written and you are posting it piece by piece?
in any case, its…:k:
hey zidee :) thanx...
na this stuff was already written... im just typing it up now... :)
thanx again