Re: -- Akhlaas kaY partau maiN jaisaY nafrat kaY tawaNger --
Bahi seriously , ap ki qabiliyaat pay shaak nahe kia tah , i really need some one to show me kay wazan say misra kaysay out hotah hai !
exculding ya , Yahan many people talk about kay yea wazan mein nahi hay yea wazan say bahar hai . but when asked they never come with a theory to support their statement:p
App tu ustad haiN :0 app ko change karny ki neend nahe the !
aliyish, I am not any ustaad...
you have to understand, I am a novice too.. perhaps Shab or Nikami can answer you better... or if Amal reads this, he sure can...
for me, I always read the thing out loud and see if it is in rythm or not.... that's how I see the wazan... by actually putting in the balance of "aawaaz" ... but I dunno if that is the correct way of finding the correct wazan..
any comments on the revision?