Aik Nai Kaawish !!

Tassneef · July 10, 2002, 11:52pm

Jaana kidhar hai jee …Just Qais ke Naqsh-e-Qadam per chal rahaa hooN

nahiN kHair Naqoosh-e-Kaff-e-Paa to Meer-o-gHaalib ke haiN Qais to ik baahanaa hai

Shukriaa Gemini sahibaa gHazal passand karne kaa (Jazzakallah)

**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

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NikamiJano · July 11, 2002, 12:19am

V nice

…aur ab beth jao chaltey chaltey kahin thaak he na jao

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~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 1:16am

Yeh Safar hi to khatam nahi ho sakte na mere
lolz maiN ne kaabhi SaagHir-o-meena pe nahIn likhe aaj maiN gHaur kar rahaa tha to maiN ne dekha keh safar per hi Hameshaa mere Sher rahe haiN maslan yeh cheedaa cheeda:-

Le ke Jaiga Bahaao waqt ka Jaane kahaaN
kab talak behnaa parhegaa Maujaa-e-Taqdeer meiN

Jo BehroN ki Basti meiN Shaiyad agaiya hai
Gadaa-e-Shehr-e-Ulfat ko Sadaa se keya milegaa

Hamaari JustajuoN ka safar dekhaa nahIn tumne
HameiN phirte huwe YouN darbadar dekha nahiN tumne
SochoN ke Ban-Baas meiN aakHir kucH to soojh hi jaaigaa
Yeh RastoN ka Pech-o-kHam kHud Manzil bhi dikhlaigaa

aur Hadd to yeh hai keh Khud hi maangta pirta hooN lollz

Meri himmat Bandhaati hai yeh meri aablaa-Paai
Talaash-e-yaar ko maiN ne azaab-e-Jaan nahiN rakhaa

Raah meiN ruknaa tha kab,sochaa nahiN
Shauq-e-Manzil meiN yeh Dhab,socha nahiN

Hamqadam hoke HawaaoUn se yeh sookhe patte
Aik bichrhe huwe Mausam ka Patta dhoondte haiN

Tawaaf-e-Shehr-e-JaanaaN se agar Tassneef Fursat ho
Thake PairoN ke neeche ik musaafat aur rakhni hai

aur to aur yeh Duaa dekhyie

Ataa ho Jaada-e-Paa meiN JunooN ka Tarz-e-safar
SukooN-e-Manzil-e-Maqsood se nikaal mujhe

Tawaaf-e-Zaat-e-Anaa meiN hooN kab se maiN Shaakir
Tu barh ke Rasta-e-Masdood se nikaal mujhe

haha main ne aaj ghaur kiya meri har gHazal ya nazm meiN yeh Safar hi rehta hai

yeh kab kHatam hoga

http://www3.pak.org/gupshup/smilies/teary2.gif

**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

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Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 3:12am

Tell me can you Nymphus-Background ?
mujhe apne PC per nazar aarahi hai zara check akrke baatana?

Ichanged it?

*Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
*

Nayab · July 11, 2002, 3:56am

[quote]
Originally posted by Tassneef:
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Yeh Safar hi to khatam nahi ho sakte na mere
lolz maiN ne kaabhi SaagHir-o-meena pe nahIn likhe aaj maiN gHaur kar rahaa tha to maiN ne dekha keh safar per hi Hameshaa mere Sher rahe haiN maslan yeh cheedaa cheeda:-

Le ke Jaiga Bahaao waqt ka Jaane kahaaN
kab talak behnaa parhegaa Maujaa-e-Taqdeer meiN

Jo BehroN ki Basti meiN Shaiyad agaiya hai
Gadaa-e-Shehr-e-Ulfat ko Sadaa se keya milegaa

Hamaari JustajuoN ka safar dekhaa nahIn tumne
HameiN phirte huwe YouN darbadar dekha nahiN tumne
SochoN ke Ban-Baas meiN aakHir kucH to soojh hi jaaigaa
Yeh RastoN ka Pech-o-kHam kHud Manzil bhi dikhlaigaa

aur Hadd to yeh hai keh Khud hi maangta pirta hooN lollz

Meri himmat Bandhaati hai yeh meri aablaa-Paai
Talaash-e-yaar ko maiN ne azaab-e-Jaan nahiN rakhaa

Raah meiN ruknaa tha kab,sochaa nahiN
Shauq-e-Manzil meiN yeh Dhab,socha nahiN

Hamqadam hoke HawaaoUn se yeh sookhe patte
Aik bichrhe huwe Mausam ka Patta dhoondte haiN

Tawaaf-e-Shehr-e-JaanaaN se agar Tassneef Fursat ho
Thake PairoN ke neeche ik musaafat aur rakhni hai

aur to aur yeh Duaa dekhyie

Ataa ho Jaada-e-Paa meiN JunooN ka Tarz-e-safar
SukooN-e-Manzil-e-Maqsood se nikaal mujhe

Tawaaf-e-Zaat-e-Anaa meiN hooN kab se maiN Shaakir
Tu barh ke Rasta-e-Masdood se nikaal mujhe

haha main ne aaj ghaur kiya meri har gHazal ya nazm meiN yeh Safar hi rehta hai

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yeh kab kHatam hoga

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Hmmm to aap kion is safaar ko khatam karna chahte hai …Na jahne chalte chalte saraaf main aap ko koun mil jahay

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Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 4:33am

Hmm Mil jayee

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abhi Mil jaayee…yaani mazeed intezaar muqaddar haii…aakHir mil kioUn nahi jaata

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maiN to safar meiN hooN aur safar bhala kabhi kHatam huwe haiN

**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 4:36am

Please let me know if you are seeing following Image also as Background? did you notice?:-

**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

Shaam-e-Firaq · July 11, 2002, 5:01am

1.Jamaal-e-Qalb-o-Nazar
2.Rang-e-kHatar
3.Deeda-e-tar
4.RakHt-e-Safar
5.Rut
6.Rah-e-kHaar
7.Zer-e-Paa
ab wah wah baad me kahain ge coz kuch samjh bhi aae to tab na itna mushkil words poetry me yeh inka meaning pehle bataaiye
keep it up

SunnyBoy · July 11, 2002, 7:12am

Buhat khoob

Yah i noticed the Background Image

Owner of Mehkama-e-Sharafat
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Rude Boyz Rulez

Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 2:13pm

Thanxxx yaar tum barhe Kaam ke bande ho ..

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**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 2:27pm

Jamaal= Khoobsooraati (Schönheit) Qalb= Dil
Deeda-e-tar= Namm aankheiN (feuchte Augen)
RakHT-e-Safar=Safar ka samaan (Zeug man auf einer Reise braucht) RakHt= Samaan (Zeug)

Rut= Mausam ..gHarhi

Rah-e-kHaar kHaar=KaanTa Rah= rastaa (kaantoN waala Raatsa)( dorniger Weg)

Zer= Neeche Paa=PaaouN = PaaouN

**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

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MARRIED_NY · July 11, 2002, 2:39pm

wah bohat khub ,,,nehayt he khubsurat kawish hai ap ki..KHUDA zor e-khalam aur daye ameen

Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 2:55pm

Shukriaa NY saahibaa

**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

HeArT_HaCKeR · July 11, 2002, 3:01pm

Tasneef uncle

DiL Ka KhiYaal Rukhna …

Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 3:03pm

Thanx HH aunty

**Be-kHudi le gai kahaaN ham ko
Der se intazaar hai apnaa
Jis ko tum Aasmaan kehte ho
So DiloN kaa gHubaar hai apnaa
**

Shaam-e-Firaq · July 11, 2002, 5:29pm

oh Buhat buhat shukriya Danke Jazakomullah
wah wah now i understand poetry and now Dil se wah wah :~P
Keep it up

NikamiJano · July 11, 2002, 6:34pm

intzaar theek ya phir ap ki gazlaiN is more per ja k rukay aur phir ap he ko kahna paraY

Ye Koon phir sey Onhi raasto meiN Choor Gayia Abhi Abhi Tou Aazaab-e-Safar sey Nikla tha

tu phiR theek hia k insan safaR per chalta he rahya keoN

~pochteY ho wo kidheR gaya
daRd buN kaR
meRay dil maiN uteR gaya~

Tassneef · July 11, 2002, 6:47pm

waaah bohaat kHoob sher

waaahhh

Chalnaa chalaana to laga rahegaa na..kioUnkeh ruknaa to maut hai aur safar Zindagi

Iss lyie mujhe Safar hi manzoor hai Peeno Jee