Aek teen saal puraani ghazal

Arts & Culture Poetry ( Intikhaab & Sho'ra-e-Gupshup)

Amal January 22, 2006, 2:13pm 1

Kisi be’wafaa ki yaadeiN kisi dil’ruba ke perchey bhala aur kya miley ga ab kisi ko merey ghar sey

meri hasratoN ki dharti saari umr rahey gi banjar
teri qurbatoN ke baadal kaheiN aur jaa ke barsey

merey dil ke gulsitaaN ko yuN zardiyoN ney loota
ab bahaar idhar naa aey shaaed khizaaN ke dar sey

teri aarzu ko ley kar meiN khaaN khaaN na bhatka
par mili na koi bashaarat mujhey maojzoN ke dar sey

meiN jugnuoN ko ley kar bettha hooN raastey meiN
thak haar ke laot aaey, wo shaaed kabhi safar sey

gar ho sakey aey hum’dum to ik pal ko laot aao
ye kash’makash ki beileiN, inhey noch daalo jarr sey

By: Amal

Koyal January 22, 2006, 4:13pm 2

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Beautiful like always :)

ghazal_kisi_ke January 23, 2006, 4:24am 3

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BOHUT KHOOB!!

janay walay lotnay kay liyay nahi jatay.

GuL-e-Tasbeeh January 23, 2006, 12:29pm 4

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Teen saal kay baad aapko post karnay ka khayaal kaesey aa geyaa:p

by the way its amazing stuff thanks for sharing:-)

Amal January 23, 2006, 12:35pm 5

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Thanx like always :~) Kaafi arsey baad nazar aai heiN, Bird Flu ki waja sey kaheiN chup to nahi gai theiN aap?

Har intizaar karney waaley ki apni qismat hoti hey. No hard rule na

[quote=“GuL-e-Tasbeeh”]
Teen saal kay baad aapko post karnay ka khayaal kaesey aa geyaa:p
/QUOTE]

Wesey hi kabhi kabhi garrey murdey ukhaarney ki dhun sawaar ho jaati hey. Ghazal pasand karney ke leeye shukriya. And nice image by the way :~)

HeArT_HaCKeR January 24, 2006, 12:15pm 6

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beautiful!

Noor_gr8 January 25, 2006, 11:08am 7

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wow buhat zabardast hai janab khusoosan yeh doosra wala sher buhat achi kawish hai niz

I feel like :(

I feel like :(

I feel like :(

safeena January 25, 2006, 7:30pm 8

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meiN jugnuoN ko ley kar bettha hooN raastey meiN
thak haar ke laot aaey, wo shaaed kabhi safar sey

Beautiful words..!

Koyal January 25, 2006, 10:38pm 9

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nahi bird flu hota tu chup kahay ko karna tha aur qaiN qaiN kar rehi hoti

Amal January 26, 2006, 1:41pm 10

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HeArT HaCKeR, Noor and Safeena, thanx for appreciating the ghazal :)
Koyal, bird flu ho bhi jaey to "qaiN qaiN" na kijeeye ga, government waaley pakarr kar ley jaaeiN ge ;)

WAZEER-E-AZAM

Koyal January 30, 2006, 9:34pm 11

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acha hia na publicity ho ghi media tv shows aur ap ko b kahnay ka moqa milay gha look that koyal i know her since …when u TELL me:cb:

Shab-e-Hijar February 16, 2006, 6:57am 12

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i jus came here to check you post and here it is...
beautifull :)

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Shab-e-Hijar February 16, 2006, 6:58am 13

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amal ye koyal hai kawa nahi jo qain qain karay gi
koyal to ko ko ko karti
kyu koyal

IS February 16, 2006, 10:00am 14

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[quote]

meiN jugnuoN ko ley kar bettha hooN raastey meiN
thak haar ke laot aaey, wo shaaed kabhi safar sey

[/quote]

bohat khoob

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Koyal February 17, 2006, 12:55am 15

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thanks shabo g Qawa banay se bacha lea ap ne

Shab-e-Hijar February 17, 2006, 12:57am 16

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u come come my koyal jano

Koyal February 17, 2006, 12:59am 17

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jano

zara paray

Shab-e-Hijar February 17, 2006, 1:14am 18

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why u laughing at jano

_Passionate February 17, 2006, 11:49am 19

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VERY nice :k:

Dilsay February 27, 2006, 2:10pm 20

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Amal jee aap tu 3 sal pahlay behi acha lakhtay thay...